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Read MoreThe voiceless tranquility of our flame, our souls searing with passion still, yearning an isolation as silent as our emotions. This flameless romance, this desert - Windswept of all fertility, populous with negativity. a fondness for solitude now, I withdraw from her as I say, ”Where I’m...
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Thank you, my friend. It was one of those rare moments. I likewise appreciate you.
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Those summer nights go by fast. Great ink.
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Right you are. It seems like they were just starting and here it is already October. Appreciate the read and the comment!
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The fireflies did it for me, a permanent night vision of childhood when poetry was found in every step, with every breath. 🙏🕊️
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Exactly what inspired that night! Appreciate the read and comment!
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Oh nice! That’s an awesome backstory there🙏🏻🕊️
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Enjoyed this pen work Detritus
Bat
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Thank you for stopping by, Bat. I am delighted you enjoyed this one.
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A firestorm of beauty and passion as I read and this unfolded. Tenderly written with exquisite attention to the encounter told both emotionally and physically in a dance. Loved reading this.
John
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Thanks for appreciating the dance…and taking time to leave a comment; I am grateful.
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Hoi hoi
Hope this finds you well.I’ve always thanked the forces, liberating us from the
Love
Love me do
You
Know
I love you
Tyranny.Looking back his Bobness only went half way…
Beautiful writes like this one do the rest.
Thank you for writing and posting.
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Gus…thanks for the kind comment. I’ll always be true.
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A tendering, trembling new love indeed. Everyone can relate to this piece. Wonderfully done, RPM! Into the list it goes!
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Thanks Daniel! Honored to make the list!
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You can beat a drum and an egg of course but you just can’t beat a nice bit of gentle well stated erotica .. Neville
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Ooh, love that comment. Thanks a bunch!
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Thomas W. Case wrote a new post
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Read MoreSome poems seem to writethemselves;I just move the pen.Others are like lumpsof clay;they refuse to be molded;they need moisture and time.This one is likea robin that just learnedto use its wings.It heads west, on agentle breeze, intoa tangerine sky.
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Thomas this speaks to me of deep abiding beauty in a timeless land. The imagery of the robin just learning to use its wings taking flight on the Western wind is just sublime. Loved reading this tonight.
John
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Thanks, John.
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Awesome write, Thomas. It reminds me of Tangerine trees and marmalade skies.
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Thank you, Alexandria.
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Excellent Thomas 😎👍
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Thanks, Brother.
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Beautifully penned, Thomas. Speaking facts here, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks, my friend.
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It flew though! Mine often slam into trees at least once. I love the way you gave the pen over & let it go
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Thank you, Willow.
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I agree with you, Thomas…that some poems actually write themselves, especially the ending, which I find to be quite surprising when the moment offers itself to me. I especially loved the eloquence and poetic nature of a “tangerine sky”. Wow, now why haven’t I ever thought of that? Good to have another transplant from the WC at the helm. Good seeing you, Thomas!
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Good to see you. Thanks. Hello Poetry is another fantastic site.
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Sorrowfully beautiful. Truly artistry in language that flows all the way until the end. You have a talent with words that is exquisite even in its sorrow. Fine art here, my friend.
John
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hello dearest John bittersweet is love in my view thank you for the love on this ❤️
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Never got to read your writing….just couldn’t get past the image of that stunning woman you provided….lol
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hello dearest Benny yes she is stunning I was looking for a more mature woman to go with the poem thank you for your response I spend a lot of time for the right images ❤️
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Lovely, Brenda. Better to let go sometimes. Lovely!
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thank you graciously dearest Daniel I never really let go though ❤️
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Beautifully penned, Detritus. Dig the imagery my friend, amazing write. Appreciate you.
Damian