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I’m digging the whole vibe/quake in this.
And I enjoyed the opening, the use of the work clockwork.
Like there are different gears that shift our writing – hence earthquake!
Just fantastic amigo!-
Thank you Del…
Hoping to get back into the routine of writing…
Very much appreciated…
After I wrote this…
I was thinking about poetry and prose…
Rhyme and off rhyme…
Or like, in this piece, I feel this sort of
approach, with like…Internal rhyme and rhyme shifts…
Well I was just thinking how it effects
the senses…
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend, I really dig the layers in your work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Stirring stuff, Thomas! I felt I was there with you, with her, with her ass – knowing how tremendously realistic your delicious poetic fantasies tend to become mid-verse… it’s probably just as well that I wasn’t! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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I live how you brilliantly rounded this out – starting with the ass, and finishing with the ass. The darker, harsher, more gritty memories walking between the reminiscence of that ass. It teases with questions but in the kind of way that stirs the mind rather than leaving dissatisfied. Always that ass…
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
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