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Read MoreAs the white doves fly to freedomMy soul is captured with youTo die of coldness and violenceWhy do I let it happen to me? I hate you for loving me; I hate you for obsessing me Controlling my thoughts by your...
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Appreciated Damian.
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This is a powerful, deeply moving piece, my friend! Too many people confuse the claim to possess somebody with love. Love blooms only in freedom and mutual respect! Especially the sentence ‘I hate you for loving mé’ cuts like a knife.
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Hello Elke. Thanks for the read and wonderful comment.
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Read MoreBeautiful safety devicesDuring a heavy car crashAt a busy intersectionThey acted like an airbag Thanks to her silicone breastsFake boobs for safety on boardImplants protected her organsFake boobs for safety on board40DD was enhanced enoughFake boobs for safety on boardArtificial...
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Phenomenally penned, Keith. Clever write my friend. They might also work as flotation devices as well. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cool. Glad you enjoyed this poem. Thanks!
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“hoping you still see something redeemable in me” That is powerful, crimsin
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hello beautiful Fia thank you graciously I appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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Magnificent write Brenda. The sadness of this piece lured me in.
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thank you graciously dearest Keith for the love on this ❤️
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Brilliantly penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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As I read I am “tumbling through the centuries” with you. A ghost, witnessing with no power to save. Your writing never disappoints, fantastic piece!
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Short and to the point my friend. Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThere is a road tosorrow.The pain is palpable.It involvesdrugs, booze, andbad women.It ends withlife under a bridge.There are lots ofhospitalizations.It's hell on earth.Seizures and sickness.Love was myhaven, but I lost it.I left ME behind.
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This is deep, Thomas. Great writing.
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Thanks
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. That’s it in a nutshell. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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This has got that certain ouch factor Thomas .. so ragged & real .. write on sir .. poetry needs you .. Neville 😎👍
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I appreciate it.
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Ouch. There’s a lot rolled into this one. But the short pieces seem to be the most hard hitting, I’ve found
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Thank you, Willow
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A great truth compelling as it is dark.
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Thank you.
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With an original touch and a Bukowskian pen you gave us a sip of yourself. Well done, Thomas!
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Fantastic piece. Well said Thomas.
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Thanks
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Thanks
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Wow this is powerful! Honest and speaking the truth as it IS, maybe in that way it opens more eyes to see.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian