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Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 9 months ago

You're ugly every morning

Poetry

September 16, 2025

16

Good Morning, You did one thing wrong, you woke upIf I haven't told you beforeI'm tired of this rut As my stomach turnsAcid reflux burnsI know exactly what I must do Do you know how I feel? when you devour a mealGo look...

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16 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  9 months ago
  
  Welcome back
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks dude.
- PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos)
  9 months ago
  
  Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
- Crimsin
  9 months ago
  
  hi Keith this is very honest❤
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
- Jacob erin-cilberto
  9 months ago
  
  If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
  simply broke the mirror.
  j.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
- Sappho (Elke)
  9 months ago
  
  This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
  Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    9 months ago
    
    Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
    Peace..xoxoxxo
- Paula Jobi
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
  It took 20 years after I left but he’s gone!
- Visions_of_Insanity
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
- Fia Naturie
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    True. Appreciate the feedback.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months, 1 week ago

Judge Not

Poetry

September 13, 2025

18

unbiased beliefs mere reflections judge not those who differ tainted thoughts so abstract judge not those who think unconditional true connection judge not those who love sentimental warm gesture judge not those who share born unafraid in the moment judge not those who live Copyright @ Damian DeadLove 2015

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18 Comments
- Nick DC
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Great message. Unfortunately I’m in a bit of a pissy mood with people these days. Wish we could all just not judge.
  
  Great ink
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I wish the same. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Fia Naturie
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Yes, I can see the late night musings in this cuz. Love the message
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. This was probably one of my earliest musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
    
    Damian
- Detritus
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Easier said than done, my friend. Still.. all we can do is our best – to live and let live. When my trust, belief and love take a hit I will remember to revisit this write. Inspiring message, thank you for the share.
  
  Clay
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Clay. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is easier said than done, all we can strive for is our best efforts towards the matter. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months ago
  
  Fantastic work. Good message.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  9 months ago
  
  I’ve always tried to hold the words “you don’t know” in the back of my mind with others. You don’t know their story, you don’t know how far they’ve fallen or how far they’ve come. You just don’t know, so don’t judge. I’ve always felt differences were beautiful. It’s what adds texture to humanity. Another fantastic write, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree, when one doesn’t know, all they can do is assume. Assumption is the mother of all fuck ups! In my honest opinion. Differences are what makes each of us unique, I embrace that. Always dig your commentary. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  9 months ago
  
  Very much enjoyed .. Neville
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  9 months ago
  
  You never know the truths behind someones personality. Message is clear & optimistic. Well done Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Sappho (Elke)
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Our differences spice up and beautify our lives. They offer a wonderful opportunity to learn more about this world and all its varieties.
  Even if it is about the topic you absolutely don’t agree, don’t judge or hate. This makes the situation even worse. Try to stay open-minded and compassionate instead and your mind will be free to find the best solution.
  An awesome and brilliantly written poem, dear Damien!
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- RomaJ
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  A beautiful and insistent plea for universal acceptance. Its rhythmic, repeated structure powerfully drives home the message that true connection requires us to simply “judge not” those who are different. Resonates in every line and leaves a quiet, lasting impact.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. In a perfect world I imagine it would be like this write, I try to remain hopeful of humanity, though it’s not always easy. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Broom wrote a new post

• 9 months, 1 week ago

The Result of Never

Poetry

September 10, 2025

4

Written by J.DoucetteCopyright © September 2025 All rights reserved.The Result of Never:Life didn’t pauseIt didn’t warn meIt just shifted—and suddenly,there you wereI blinkedI gaspedno way… is this real?YesIt wasfor both of usIn that oneundeniable moment—it wasbut it takes workmutual...

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4 Comments
- Crimsin
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  “where your eyes almost met my soul so many great lines here I can feel your pain lovely lady hugs 💕
- Damian DeadLove
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Jackie. Pulls at my heartstrings, amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Knight
  9 months ago
  
  A very intense piece.
  
  So much brooding. I hear you.
  
  Regards
  James
- Jim Musics
  9 months ago
  
  Quite beautiful. Love always takes work, but perhaps not so much.
  Touching words dear.
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months, 1 week ago

Bow Out

Poetry

September 8, 2025

22

My circle seems to be getting smaller Does change scare people away? It seems kinda funny sometimes My friends don’t like self-improvement Why bother hovering around here All you wanna do is fucking drink Piss and moan about everything Blame everyone not named you Toxic environment inside...

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22 Comments
- Alexandria
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Good write, Damian. There’s always that “Lord Of The Flys” affect when too many egos are involved. I’m glad you broke away.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You can say that again, I’m glad I broke away as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Sometimes when we opt to bow out, we find amazing things. Where you go will always be determined by you that way. What they do? As my daughter would say, that’s a them problem. Fly, my friend!
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Very true, I unlocked a different world from the one I knew before. So glad I opted out of that toxic environment. A them problem, indeed. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  I’ve been there. I know the animosity that grows over time slowly until it boils over. It’s very disappointing after it’s all over and done. It keeps going through your mind even years later. Good one, Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It does kinda always stick in the recesses of my mind. In the words of DLR: “I knew I had company.” You’ve been there as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Tremendous work, my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Paula Jobi
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  We are always in a state of change. I’m trying to let go of past events. People may read a piece or two about enduring an horrific childhood but there comes a point to emerge as the survivor and not dwell on what can’t be changed.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Paula. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That we are, sounds like wise words to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  That’s some fantastic venting. “Blame everyone not named you”. I been butting heads lately with someone like this.
  
  Great ink.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with write my friend. Then you know the feeling, not easy people to deal with. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  9 months ago
  
  Everyone Sux! Powerful write Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Julie
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  As I’m new here and don’t know your story and I don’t know the background to your write here but I loved it’s raw energy the swearing 🤬 even and the emotion the regrets (if any )self doubt of your decision (probably not ) and the style so
  When you gotta go you just gotta go ! A new chapter awaits you
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 3 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Julie. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I have no regrets, I started a new chapter in my life, as well as in my creative journey. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Julie
  8 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Hi all good Thanks have a good day
- RomaJ
  8 months ago
  
  Wow, that’s incredibly raw and honest. You really capture the intensity and eventual breaking point of that kind of toxic partnership. It’s great to hear your creativity has resurfaced– you definitely ended on the strongest note by realizing you decide when to bow out.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Roma. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was definitely toxic, it took me getting sober and about two and a half years before I started writing again. Then I was at DUP for about 10 months before it closed. It was because of that community I found myself again. I moved here with some of them and am watching the Stars Rite community grow into something special, this is my home now. Sorry for rambling on, I do that sometimes. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Neville
  7 months, 1 week ago
  
  Don’t ya just know when enough is enough .. Well penned my friend .. 😎👍
  - Damian DeadLove
    7 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yes, kinda wish it had happened sooner. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
    - Neville
      7 months, 1 week ago
      
      No problem, my pleasure .. Neville 👍
Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 9 months, 2 weeks ago

Wicked Woman

Poetry

September 4, 2025

16

somethin’ bout the way she movessubtle yet so attractivethe innocent way her body groovesshe’s a hurricane burning radioactiveseductive eyes that mystifymakes you wanna fucking danceshe’s the spider, yeah you’re the flycaught up in a web of circumstance… don’t turn your...

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16 Comments
- Neville
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  That’s one helluva wicked woman you just poemed Damian .. way to go my friend .. if you would kindly send me her coordinates I will stop by and convey my regards .. Neville
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That she was, her coordinates were lost in the late 90’s. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Alexandria
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I love this, Damian. It reminds me of “Witchy Woman” by the Eagles. 🌾🕊️
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Alexandria. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s high praise, and good company. What a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Tim
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I wish I could hear the music behind it. Perhaps someday we’ll get a glimpse of your energy and fire within your lyrics. Good one, Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Well through GarageBand and Logic Pro, I’m working on that. lol. The problem with not being able to play an instrument, is that it only leaves a few options. So I’m working on a solo album to give these old lyrics a home, there will be new lyrics as well. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Willow
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  I sincerely hope this one makes the album cut! I so badly wanna hear it! It moves like a snake, undulates down the page. Perfect for the lyrics, my friend
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 2 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with lyrics my friend. I plan on this one making the cut, I’ve always wanted “Wicked” to have music again. It had music in 97, but it was never recorded. Thanks for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Nick DC
  9 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  This is fire, friend. Everyone loves a wicked woman.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s the theory.. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  Powerful work.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Styxian
  9 months, 1 week ago
  
  I can hear this playing in some club… maybe even a strip club!? LOL
  It has a great beat to the lines. It’s also very entertaining! Awesome job Damian.
  - Damian DeadLove
    9 months, 1 week ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I try, I always write to the beat in my head. Maybe a strip club, or some other place where human beings gather. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  9 months ago
  
  Killer piece dude. You’re a talent my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    8 months, 4 weeks ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
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