Lilly

Fia Naturie
4 weeks, 1 day ago

Well this is musing. lol
liked the people like privacy they get intrusion part really good
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 4 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I liked that line as well. Appreciate you, Cuz.
  
  Damian
Neville
3 weeks, 5 days ago

thoroughly enjoyed Damian .. & then some .. Neville
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 4 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Knight
3 weeks, 5 days ago

Hellish visions. Intense feeling.
Regards
James
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 4 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, James. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes intense feelings guide the poem along in my experience. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Styxian
3 weeks, 5 days ago

A bit towards the apocalypse in its foretelling, yeah? I also get a “War Pigs” vibe as well (Black Sabbath).
Excellent rhyme scheme as well. Great write Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 4 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see the “War Pigs” vibe too. Sabbath has always been an influence in my creative efforts. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Sappho (Elke)
3 weeks, 4 days ago

Wow, one more of your excellent, intense and thought provoking right things, dear Damien! Especially the last verse speaks to me a lot. World most people consider God as all seeing eye that is watching and judging us, all sing that UI energy is just experiencing itself, manifested and the form of a human being. So it is entirely up to us what to do with our lives. Personally, I think it is best to listen to our heart and to our intuition. Why won’t lead us a stray.
- Sappho (Elke)
  3 weeks, 4 days ago
  
  Sorry for the typing Arrows, Damian!
  - Damian DeadLove
    3 weeks, 3 days ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. No worries about the typing errors, it happens to all of us from time to time. It is best to search for the light in all things in my opinion. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
Willow
2 weeks, 2 days ago

The dawn of machine signals the end of man if caution isn’t employed. Got all these billionaires using computers to do the skills they lack so they don’t have to pay a human to do it. They’re willfully writing us out of the margins and people are just buying into it. Everything is subscription based now. Even things we bought and paid for. We’re paying to exist now. We need a revolution, bro
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is sad to see that some people will cheer and support the thing that will replace them and bring them pain and possibly even death. I give up on understanding that kind of logic, they can cancel my subscription, because I ain’t buying! Appreciate you, Sis.
  
  Damian
Bat Powers
1 week, 6 days ago

Spot on Damian. This ink bleeds of today!
- Damian DeadLove
  2 days, 20 hours ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Kathy J Anderson
2 weeks, 3 days ago

You’re just fine, it’s a state of being we all get into here and there. Nothings permanent. Nice read.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Kathy. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s part of being human I guess, but yes, nothing is permanent. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Fia Naturie
2 months ago

You two merged very well and I love the way it seems so seamless, yet your personalities shown through
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the collaboration my friend. I agree totally. Appreciate you cuz.
  
  Damian
Styxian
2 months ago

Great combo bonus writing! Well articulated and carries a meaningful message fluidly throughout. Y’all did awesome!
- Damian DeadLove
  2 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the collaboration my friend. I agree that Keith and I had great chemistry on this one. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

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