Good Morning,
You did one thing wrong, you woke up
If I haven’t told you before
I’m tired of this rut
As my stomach turns
Acid reflux burns
I know exactly what I must do
Do you know how I feel?
when you devour a meal
Go look in the mirror
Can’t look at you,
you’re ugly every morning
My headache is now gone,
relieved we have no spawn
Use to be a naughty ass slut,
now all you want are glazed doughnuts
Doesn’t matter how much you think
or the number of hairs in the sink
I can’t continue this anymore
Do you know how I feel?
when you devour a meal
Go look in my mirror
Can’t look at you,
you’re ugly every morning
Welcome back
Thanks dude.
Great! Happy to see you here. Big hug.
Hello PAR. Appreciate the comments.
hi Keith this is very honest❤
Nice to hear from you Brenda. Thank you..xo
If they were Krispy Kreme, I might understand the urge. But wow, Vol, this is so upfront and in your face, I think it
simply broke the mirror.
j.
HA! Yeah Krispy Kreme’s are good. That mirror has been broken for a long time. No need to fix. Thanks Jacob. Appreciate it!!
Powerfully penned, Keith. Great write my friend, you still bring it. Appreciate you.
Damian
Thanks Damian. Appreciate the comment.
This is a hard hitting piece that tells more about the state of the relationship than about the outer appearance of this woman. If he looked at her with the eyes of love, everything about her from the messy hair to the stained dressing gown would appear beautiful to him. He would only see her inner beauty. But between the couple you describe there isn’t much love anymore.
Perfectly observed and put into words, dear Keith! Xoxo
Hello Sappho. You’re right. There is no love left here in this relationship. Only criticism and mockery. A wonderful observation only you can deliver my awesome friend.
Peace..xoxoxxo
Kinda felt that way about my first husband. I have referred to him as Fat Boy and tiny-dick. Worst was that despite being nearly 400 lbs (I always say 600) and having a “stub” – he cheated! Add in the violence and threats…I wished for him to die.
It took 20 years after I left but he’s gone!
DAMN! I believe you mentioned “fat boy” & “tiny dick” in a few of your writes. Appreciate the feedback, always!
Well, Damn, the reiteration of Go look in the mirror is a banger. People generally do not see what they become until they are forced to. Keith very, very open write
True. Appreciate the feedback.