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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
Holding Hands
When they began
They held hands
They smiled
They illuminated the skyChairs were held
Giggles slipped freely
And the thought of
What base is a good one for this dateTime goes by
Rings were bought
Vows were said
In laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr. McCoyEvery step in life taken
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I do not mind at all. I love the responses I receive from my poems.
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Read MoreWhen they beganThey held handsThey smiledThey illuminated the sky Chairs were heldGiggles slipped freelyAnd the thought ofWhat base is a good one for this date Time goes byRings were boughtVows were saidIn laws glare rivaling Spoke on star trek at Dr....
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I enjoyed this one. Without a doubt, if holding hands is how it ends…I would not change a thing.
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Thank you Angel Louise;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Dig the Star Trek reference by the way. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you cuz. I am a Star Trek fan lol:))
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“Would you ever want the loop to end?“
That’s a great, almost philosophical question. Some people like to escape a loop because they only see the endless repetition of the same actions. To me it holds the chance to experience new aspects of old routines on the basis of familiar facts. It’s adventurous and reliable at the same time.
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Thank you Sappho;))
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I recently had a co worker/friend who lost her husband. He was a young guy too. I read this feeling like you could have wrote this for them, and my heart breaks all over. Thank you for this sad beautiful read.
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Thank you Brandon;))
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Powerful and poignant. Great write.
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Thank you Thomas;))
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Wow a lot of times if the love and bond is that strong it would be hard to live without them.
I know a friend who recently past a few months after because he couldn’t live without his beloved wife.Powerful great write
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That does happen. If the bond is that strong. thank you Lizz:))
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Finding a soul mate is hard enough in a lifetime but then losing them?
Yes, that ending line does beg the question many people would agree to.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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Read More“Once again Lois smelled invisible jet fuel and pussyAnd she instantly thought ‘why Clark is still doing this shit to me?’ “The last time Lois caught her it was not even a fightLois received a broken...
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Oh poor Superman. The pain of it.
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Lois showed him that she is the Super Bitch.
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Wow he pulled off his dick that’s a new one.
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It’s that kryptonite combined with betrayal Lol
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D. Ignatov is with Randall and 85 others
Friends, I want to share with you that I have channels on Odysee https://odysee.com/@ignatov:c
and Rutube https://rutube.ru/channel/31410769/videos/ , where I post audio versions of my stories, book trailers, and music tracks based on the plots. The content is in Russian, but if you’re learning Russian or just interested, welcome!P.S.
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Beautiful illustration, Dmitry! You surely know how to make them!
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Thanks! ^_^
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Nice work, keep up the good work.
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Thank you!
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Your rutube fantasy page looks impressive – well done you! I couldn’t find you on the other site, though.
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THX!
Do you mean “Odysee”? Every character in the link is important…
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Yes, Odysee.
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This is awesome D. I’ll look into it.
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Thanks! ^_^
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Really sounds interesting we promise to give it a look
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Thank you ^_^
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Rosie C Changed their profile cover
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There is a motion, a movement to everything, to life. It has a direction and it is forward, not backward. For love to last, it has to change as the people involved change and as the world around them change. I have found this is how love, or any relationship, evolves, strengthens and continues. It is fun to remember the way we were, but even more…Read More