Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with incredible storytelling and amazing imagery my friend. Dig the jazz references and the mention of Coltrane & Parker along with your use of chess terminology. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks, my friend.

There are so many layers to this. It’s almost a sultry piece of music accompanied by chess…not the other way around. This is definitely a multiple read piece 😊

tHANK YOU

Small town and big city is no difference because those in the small town crave to be in the city and those in the big city want to be in the small town. Yet they bring with them the same thing. No change just the recycling.

Powerful.

Small towns and big cities all have in common…both those with small minds and those with open minds. I think this would be a fantastic song, my friend

Tremendous. Powerful work.

Thank you.
I was watching them return this morning and this resulted.

Beautifully penned, PAR. An excellent write with a catchy flow to it my friend. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.

Damian

This piece reminded me of some psychedelic trip. Visually and lyrically speaking. I need to listen to some Jefferson Airplane! Nice work my friend.