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Read MoreEvery day, every secondbeats alive in my mindwhen I’m far away from you when I’m far away from youconstant moments on rewindenough to fill miles of cloudswith happiness and Valentine’s Day rain Valentine’s Day rain. kissing...
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Chère F.,
This was the coop I was telling you about.I hope you listened with as much fun as A. and I had while making it.
On the SoundCloud version (identical version) I thank Ricky as well.Also on behalf of Adelphina, grateful for you listen and comment!
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Hahaha. Thanks!
Thank god for Ricky, he helped me sound decent. lol
It was an experience for sure:)
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Nicely done, Adel. You and Gus did an amazing job on this song. Love the trippy effect on the chorus, I’m assuming with reverb.. You got a better voice than I do. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Hi Ramian,
I’m grateful for the listen en want to thank you, also on behalve of Adelphina of course.
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Hey Damien
Much respect for the singers out there!
Ricky had me doing pushups so I would project my voice better.
It’s not my thing but I had to give it a shot. lolThanks for taking a listen!
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Chère A.,
Hope this finds you well?!You see, it’s not half as scary as you may have thought I guess.
There’s a first time for all fun and harmless things, and this is such a thing. Kicking some ideas around with a very happy sounding outcome!I simply loved the whole process. I am grateful for you having done this coop with me. And extra grateful for children who support the quirkies of their parents. And a very nice touch of voice doubling on the chorus.
I love it from the first to the last second! Until we’ll meet again… electronically (to prevent gossip – there’s not a first for everything I think). Wish your first song published Tuesday will sound as happy as your voice.
Warm greetings, Gus-
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Thank you for the invite and pushing me out of my comfort zone.
I will never forget it, that’s for sure. Haha
Ricky did great with me and as so patient! lolThanks again Gus!
Rock on buddy!
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Well, darn. I love how you are branching out in so many directions creatively. And yes, I smile every time you serenade me with this song. (hey thats what you called it!). Props to Gus and Ricky for their help. keep in mind that this is your first try at something like this, and it is not horrible! So don’t knock yourself over it, punk!
And then this evening, you did another poetry reading in your town. Damn! I am so happy sharing your enthusiasm and energy. You are incredible my love.-
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Hoi hoi S.,
The line between bragging and pride is thin. I choose pride. Grateful for your listen and comment.You, the reason A. set this up/wrote and sang it, Ricky who supported his mother, and me by the coop all have our role in this. And I love what is happening.
The professionals who have listened so far, mentioned:
– Velvet Underground and Nico
– Early Jefferson Airplane
– Early Blondie
It can’t be bad if profs compare you with their heroes.A. has links and screen dumps of the comments.
I envy her courage and love how this all developed.
Happy Friday/weekend to you and A.
Warm regards, Gus-
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Thanks again Gus.
What you’ve given me in confidence will never be forgotten amigo:)
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Hey you!
Trying something new is always scary for me.
But you only live once and I had to do this! It felt wrong for someone else to sing those words.
They are from me to you!
So yeah. We all did an our best with this coop and I am very proud of how it turned out.
And hey! It’s Friday!! I’ll be seeing you next week punk! HahahaLove you babe
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Nicely done! Especially this line:
sending you vivid dreams
of how the night has short curves
and breathes falling stars
and breathes falling stars
that traveled 51 yearsThat gave me chills.
Thank you for sharing
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Hey!
Thank you:)The whole process was quite an experience. Haha
Thanks for stopping by!
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![Profile picture of Drieks]()
You did it!! So cool! Love the song Adelphina and Gus.
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Hey chica! Thank you!
I was terrified posting this, had a stomach ache and everything! Hahaha
Turns out I didn’t have a heart attack so it all went great.
My son has his set up in his room and helped immensely!I’ve also started going to open mic night for poetry in my community
Now that almost gave me a heart attack!I love all of your music so thank you for the inspiration:)
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I’m so glad you posted it! I’ve been checking in every now and then after you told me about it. Can’t believe I almost missed it… 😓
Ooh open mics for poetry? I don’t even have a clue if that’s a thing where I live.
That sounds awesome! I might have to research that.I’m so happy you like the music I post 💕
I could never sing though 🫣
Respect to you! And your son!
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As we would say back in the day, “I’ll give it a 99.8. It’s got heart, it’s got soul, and a beat you can dance too.” So where can I get the album?? Tell me there’s an album. Way to go Adelphina, Gus and Ricky. Rock On!! -Curt
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Hahah! Thank you Curt!
This was quite the opportunity to do a coop with Gus.
Never in a million years did I see this coming. I’m so glad I saw it through.
Thanks again for the awesome comment!
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@anyone doubting the power of coops/update
Posted on StarsRite And SongUTD (very very small forum) but still 66 listens.
Plus posted on Gitaarnet.nl/forum.
The counter there says 245, so a steady 20 people (musicians) per day who come to listen to this.A very nice way to start a new week!
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Thank you for sharing all these updates!!!!
Hope you are having a wonderful trip!Be safe!
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This takes me back to the early days of MTV…has that feel to it. Makes me wish I could still sing. Nicely done, both of you!
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Hey, I just found this, it’s not bad. Your voice sounds pretty good for someone who isn’t a professional singer. Better than I anticipated. I wouldn’t mind hearing another one in the future. Great job, Adelly!!!
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
What Isn’t Heard
there’s a vastness…
you can’t even fathom…
a universe you can’t imagine…
within the realm of silencestories untold
realities unexpected
contemplative reflection
pain unspokeneverything locked inside a vacuum
where the wall of it…
can hold someone hostage
a victim of their own thoughtsyou can’t…Read More
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Yes, I can hear that silence. It’s the silence of a mother whose son has been cut down in a gang war or a war in a foreign country. Or the anguish of needing formula for our kids but no money to buy it. It’s the search for decent work, but not enough education to get it. Its the cries of children hiding under desk when the gunman came to school.…Read More
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I didn’t have a choice on writing this. It’s been much on my mind of late. That deafening, heart-rending silence unheard from outside. Thank you for hearing it with me, Curt
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Carried Away
neglected winds howled their fury
blowing through a door ajar…
startled…
she dropped to cower…
piercing chill burning
skating across thundering veinssudden silence filled empty pockets
scoured sterile by the pain
tomorrow has no meaning
the past has gone awayfrozen fists slowly opened
letting go…
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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
Still Strolling…
it can’t be far away…
can it?
that elusive brighter tomorrow?
I’m not asking much…
just a warm spring day
maybe a chance of sprinkles
and a walk amongst nature’s glory
the cloying scent of honeysuckle gagging the senses
lilacs swaying in the breeze
birds in full choral exuberance
vibrantly budding trees
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Read Moreit can't be far away... can it? that elusive brighter tomorrow? I'm not asking much... just a warm spring day maybe a chance of sprinkles and a walk amongst nature's glory the cloying scent of honeysuckle gagging the senses lilacs swaying in the breeze birds in full choral...
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I get it too. This is peaceful and hopeful Willow
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I’m trying! Thank you, Fia 😊
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I’m like you nature is my medicine beautiful Willow I loved this ❤️
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Nature is the best medicine! Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Such a hopeful and positive write my friend. This was an excellent read, nicely done as always. Your ramblings are amazing. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I try not to let my mind out to wander on its own too often. Gets lost. But with these daily writes…sometimes I just gotta. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Outside is where we belong. It rejuvenates our mind & soul. Great piece Willow.
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Circumstances being other than they currently are, I’d be completely happy living in a tent. Being what they are though, give me a cabin on a mountain and I’m golden. Thank you 😊
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I felt like I am there while reading your poem. Well done, Willow!
Is that you beside the Eucalyptus tree? “)-
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No eucalyptus trees where I am, hahaha. Thank you, M.E.
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This is so cool. I happy you both did it. Nice going to Ricky;))