I like this. The wizbit made me remember Mork and Mindy.

I enjoyed this science fiction story

Phenomenally penned, Sam. Great write, fantastic imagery my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic, Samuel.

Thanks, Thomas.

Well, I would say you have outdone yourself, Sam — but obviously, you haven’t. A good bit of fun, though. Worthy of a series? Only 14,089 more chapters and you’d have a book, one that would fit in one of those tiny saucers. Keep up the good work, Sam.

Thanks. I’m working on chapter II right now–Dogbik confronts a gas pump and says “take me to your leader”

What a charming little story. I didn’t know how it was going to end up going about halfway through but alls well that ends well.

A heart-warming story, Sam. Your characters always have personality that is lovable in some way…even a cat. 🙂

Ah, the sweet, gentle world of an innocent young girl (I’ve one posted simply, “Girl”).

Sam,
You never fail to touch your readers’ hearts, minds, ‘n souls in bringing to life your characters’ personalities (even a cat’s), and in how they each fit so perfectly into your stories’ always interesting plots … and, your grammar is exemplary.

This is a most lovely piece, and I love the surprise ending.
I hope you like it here, Sam … the site needs your “special” touch! ⁓ Richard🖌

Thank you, Richard.

Thank you. Yeah, scary stuff for Halloween.

This is so sad, and I can feel how much he misses her. Even the everyday mundane things stray to thoughts of her. Very good story,

Well, now, this is just a butt-kicker. You set the scene brilliantly, then proceed to serve up dose after dose of sadness. I feel this poor guy’s pain, and want to buy him a beer or something. I didn’t know you had this kind of writing in you. Hopefully, there’s more.

Deep resonance of emotions here. Compelling literature that captures a night at the laundromat that is anything but ordinary. Original captivating and powerfully rendered. Your attention to detail of the scene and the character emotional response to the event unfolding before him is as touchingly developed as it is strong. Truly gifted prose writing.

John

That got a giggle and smile out of me. enjoyed this.
Welcome to Stars Rite

Thank you, Fia. I’m one of those Writer’s Cafe folks who is looking for a more reliable site. I look forward to meeting new friends and sharing my work.

Your stories never let me down, Sam. I always get a laugh or a nugget of wisdom. Good one. 🙂

Fantastic work. Fun stuff.

Hi-ya, Sam!

Glad to see ya here, M’Friend. : )
As usual, your story is loaded with wonderfully relatable visuals; here, the kinds that tease a knowing smile from the lips of naughty boys … the kind girls seem to warmly favor.
Love “jealous ears” and her “ponytail”.

Oh, there’s truth in it alright, Sam, and damn those party-poopin’ spuds!!! ⁓ Richard (Rascal)🖌

Thanks, Richard. We men are much the same, are we not?