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Read MoreAfter lacing my running shoes,I strode down the sidewalklike a ship plowing through the sea.Five miles, I thought, do or die. In the distance, I heard the cara mile away tearing through streets. He was a nuisance.He drove a 1970 Chevrolet...
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Thank you, very much for the comment, Fia. 🙂
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this reminds me of a pickup that used to race down my street you could hear him coming for miles but when he went by it was just a streak of an odd light I used to honestyly think it was Lucifer…it’s crazy…I really enjoyed this 💕
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Thanks Crimson. Lets hope he doesn’t come back to haunt you with his spinning wheels.
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Brilliantly penned, Tim. Love the flow and the imagery my friend, amazing storytelling as well. What a waste of a classic machine, assholes find a way to ruin everything they touch. lol. I’m also a car guy. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Much appreciated.
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Read MoreOne afternoon beneath a tree,my age no more than twenty-three,'pon Mary's supple, soft red cheekI placed a kiss that made me weak. In me, her charms endowed romancewith ev'ry quick, flirtatious glance.At every turn of every stroll,a kiss from her...
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Brilliant.
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I appreciate the comment, Thomas. Thank you.
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hello dearest Tim I love the rhythm and content of this write beautiful 💕
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Thank you Crimson. :))
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Beautifully penned, Tim. Truly an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
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Thanks so much, Damian.
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Read MoreTwo toddlers wore rain In the yard, in the fogof a heavy downpour,two toddlers wore the rainlike tight-fitted jeans, which clung to them so soggy, and yet in moments of gleewith a spin and a spree they giggled and laughed,a thousand thuds, as each...
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Phenomenally penned, Tim. Another fantastic collection my friend. Excellent work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Tim I wonder besides rain what these poems have in them that weave them together there is something ominous I can sense… great write 💕
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Superb flow.
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Ahhh! 🌧
What could be better, My Good Friend Tim, than a captivating soliloquy of imaginative Free Verse poetry from the rainbow of your dancing pen, creatively presenting the wonders of “Rain” to fill and soothe our parched imaginations.
Nice rhymes ‘n imagery in Poem 1, and your artwork choice sets the perfect mood.
I enjoyed each offering … particularly:“For an hour, the sky recites
poems from heaven
and I listen…mesmerized.”Outside my window, rain’s forecast today … I’m keeping my best umbrella and shiny red boots handy!
Good stuff, Syr Poet … much enjoyed, as usual! ⁓ Rascal🖌150/100
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Haha, shiny red boots? Thank you Richard, your comments are always entertaining and interesting. It’s always good to know there’s a master of poetry around. 🙂
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Quite a collection, Sir Tim.
Especially the woman in the window piece. Yet, the beginning obviously draws the reader in, with the vivid imagery. Well stocked stack of art, this.
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Thank you Styx. It’s good to see you to. 🙂
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Well, Damn, both things met their end. Very interesting poem. Nice;))