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    Marcella

    Marcella Marcella wore blue stockings yesterday, presumably to hide the bruise she recently invited me to touch or see .. Marcella bears a faint though hungry and private scar that only those fingertips or lips and tongues of curious, or serious lovers are welcome...

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    • Beautiful work, my friend. Powerful writing.

    • This sounded like a daydream that you wish came true.

    • It is true Fia although recalled here from way back, indeed, near lost to time, but saved in this little scribble & hopefully for always .. Thanks for calling .. always appreciated .. Neville

    • “Marcella does not need reminding of her beauty, but then, occasionally, she likes to be pointed in that direction”. You have such a way of paraphrasing a line, that makes it speak for itself. I am such an admirer of your work, but then, I think you already know that!

      My “Icarus” will soon be “falling”. Can’t wait to get your reaction! Oh, btw, I really like your avatar! So distinguished and handsome!

      • You my very dearest of Kelly’s are way too generous & kind my friend but believe me, you are also very seriously appreciated .. Thank you so bloomin much .. Oh’ n for what it’s worth, this old fella reckons you aint half bad yourself Ma’am .. 😎🍷🍷👍

    • Beautifully penned, Neville. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Misreading the signs.

    i picked herlike a novelthe cover waseye catchingexquisitei would startto read her in depthbut not finishso i'd start again laterthen againthen againwe marriedand i discoveredi should have finishedor at leastread the plotor table of contentsi had no ideawhat i...

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    • Hahah You needed Cliff Notes to read the book. This is good.;))

    • Book covers are meant to draw you in even if the book itself is rubbish.
      I used to plough through books even if they were rubbish….not now.I give them about two chapters.If they haven’t got me by then,it’s arrivederci.
      Our partners should be treated the same….lol

    • I have three books I would like to return. Is that possible.
      I must have missed something in those synopses.
      j.

      • That’s a lot of money spent, J. 🙂 They must have been horror books. lol thanks.

    • Reading has its dangers lol. Can’t help feeling this poem is going to be relatable to many. Made me smile you did Tim.

      Chris

    • Clever, funny, and painfully relatable – This is the kind of truth you laugh at because it hurts a little. haha
      The final line is brilliant.

    • So you didn’t read any articles, you just looked at the pictures…LOL

    • Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • So true! A 20 yr old boy at my local market goes on and on about the girl he is going to marry. They met on the Internet a few months ago and met up in person twice. You can’t suggest he slow down. So often, we think we know it all. I was going to be happy when I escaped my .
      mother’s home. First hubby was as violent and crazy as her.

      • I really appreciate your comment, Paula. I assumed you didn’t like anything I wrote. 🙂
        Yes, some guys are too lost in the fantasy world to see what’s really there. Life will splash some cold water in their face when it’s too late.

        Sorry about your hubby and mom. I know it’s hard to get over that or forget. My mother was an alcoholic. I’ve had some horror in my life to.

    • I love this. I never read in depth the outline of the or their stories either. A great metaphor you gave loved it 😍

    • Superb work, my friend.

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