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    Art, Humanity & Friendship

      Art, Humanity And Friendship   A friend once said to me her writings - poems, short stories; even how she dips herself in a variety of hues, then throws herself on a canvas, is more or less her memoir. Snips of her life taken, compiled, then thrown into the air for all...

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    • Art to me is polished work and imagination in the same brushstroke. The best art remains for generations. It effects people in a way they can see something in life that grabs them and holds them. This includes writing as well.

      Nice one ~Relic~

      • Hi Relic/Tim (I am assuming from WC), thank you for your view on art. Yes, art should grab and hold (if done well) or as Ntozake Shange once said, “poetry should make you feel”. I think this is true for all forms of artistic endeavors.

        Thanks for your comment Relic and it’s nice to see you here at the SR.
        -Curt

    • You’re welcome, Curt (Redzone). And yes, It’s me. 🙂

    • Hi Fia, Relic is Tim’s pen name. He is one of the poets who has come here to SR from Writers Cafe. My real name is Curtis (Curt) and my pen name is redzone. Sorry if I have created any confusion.

      Yes, I think we write for ourselves (be ourselves) because art comes from within us, from our imaginations or from our lives. But I also think it’s our way of communicating to others. We bare ourselves to the world when we post or get a book published or in the many other ways that our poems are seen by other people. Yes, poems are “vivid” and should be. They should grab us, hold us tight and make us feel, and see the world though other’s eyes. I used to paint, but haven’t done so for many years now. I think about picking up the brushes every so often.

      Anyway, thank you Fia for sharing your views on art. And thank you for your visit to this poem, it’s much appreciated.
      -Curt

    • Art is a place for me where I can become more myself. Vivid in each pen stroke. Whether its poetry or stories. ( I used to draw, but that ship has sailed.) Nice piece, Redzone. Sorry for the confusion

    • Powerfully penned, Curt. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you, Damian. And I appreciate your visit and comment. Both are muchly welcomed
      -Curt

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    A Thousand Kisses Deep

    a thousand kisses deep   intheebbofhissmilei am drowning,inathousandkissesdeep.      

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    • The imagery of drowning in a smile and being a thousand kisses deep perfectly captures the feeling of being completely swept away by someone. Great write.

      • Thank you most kindly, Roma. I’m discovering more and more transplants from the WC everyday…feels wonderful, too!

    • I echo the comment above. Great poem, Kelly.

      • Hi Tim! I never really thanked you for being the first to tell me about “Stars Rite”. I checked it out because of you and Sam. I’ll always remember the kindness. Thank you!

        • My pleasure, Kelly. My time at WC is basically over so it’s good to see you and other friends from there on here. If I pop in to WC it’s probably to grab a few poems. 🙂

          • Charlie was there yesterday. The “online writer’s” feature had his face in the place. Lol, I guess he gave it a reboot, because it’s all up and running again. You should go back and get while the getting is good!

    • this reads like a melody of passion I can feel it ❤️

      • Passion is the one thing this world could use a little more of. I try to compose it into as much of my poetry as I can. Thank you for acknowledging that…and nice to meet you!

    • I love this post Kelly; it is absolutely dreamy in a sensual ambience….
      Warmly, B

    • Thank you, Betty! Feels good to have familiar faces looking back at me as I type!

    • Short and perfectly sweet Kelly

    • My forte is writing with a brevity of words. Thank you, Peter. So nice to meet you!

    • Wow, that is a smile

      • Thank you so much, Fia. I was surprised to find you’ve been a writer at the WC for some time, that our paths have never crossed till now. I find it comforting to know, as a moderator yourself, that you are also a poet, and fully understand the significance of having such a venue like this to call home. My poetry is my haven, my passion in life. Thank you for giving me a safe place to land.

    • Beautifully penned, Kelly. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Oh’ my .. but what a way to go Kelly eh’ .. ink spilled perfectly … again .. inktoxicating poetry .. Neville 😎🍷👍

    • If I only had an audience of one, I’d be content if it were you! Thanks, Nev!

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    A Poem

      A Poem   oo0oo   Dream like, innuendo breathes deep moving slowly in a heart beat. And then you said, ‘Hi’. Reality flowed quickly from a dream.   What is a dream but a shadow roaming the mind. Illusive, like fire in a red dress dancing bare foot to music only you...

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    • This is sweet with a touch of trouble. “Red Dress” Nice

      • Hi Fia! Oh yes, she was trouble! Thank you for your kind words. And thank you for this Stars Rite poetry site.

    • Hi Curt,

      I really enjoyed this – it has such a dreamy, floating quality, I love how it moves from the soft, floating imagery of dreams into the sudden jolt of reality. “And then you said,” ‘Hi.’” The image of a dream as “fire in a red dress dancing barefoot” is striking and memorable. It feels like a brief, beautiful moment where fantasy and reality touch. Dreams inspire me. This piece resonates with me

      • Exactly RomaJ. Thank you. If I remember correctly, this dream woke me up. Unfortunately, there was no “reality” of her dancing in a red dress, barefoot or otherwise. Oh well. Dreams do inspire. It inspired this poem. Thanks again for your kind words and visit.
        -Curt

    • This is somewhat like Déjà vu to me. Something kind of jolts you, but in a way, you’ve felt it before.

      • To be honest, I was roaming through some of my notebooks and found this poem. So in one sense, yes, there was some Deja vu involved. But it was a dream I had back then (2009) that found its way on paper.

        Thank you, Tim, for your comment and perspective on this poem.
        -Curt

    • Beautifully penned, Curt. Amazing write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Thank you, Damian, for your wonderful comment, your visit, and your ‘welcome’ to SR. I am glad to be here. As I get more acclimated to the site, I will do a lot more reading. Reading some of your creations is near the top of the Read List.
      Thanks again,
      -Curt

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