Beautifully quiet and contemplative. You made me pause.

Powerfully penned, Neville. Excellent write my friend. You’ve been missed around here. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is really deep and that time needs us is very interesting thought.

This takes me to the thought…if it’s not noticed, is it real? Time is one of the most precious gifts, and it’s not an infinite sum allotted. Pay attention to it. It’s gone between one breath and the next. This is brilliant in its simple complexity. It’s good to see your words again

What Willow said.
An awesome take on what is so taken for granted.

You give life to this poem. That in a sense, is what poems should do breath on its own

I agree, Fia. Thanks for the comment. 🙂

Beautifully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

I agree, a good poem is like a good friend. It can give you comfort, support, encouragement, understanding… An honest poem mirrors the soul of the poet and makes them deeply human.

I love the way this reads like an old friend stopping by—so comforting.

Amen. rain or shine, a poem is a day in the life of words.