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    A Squirrel

    A SquirrelI have a cute visiting squirrelHe came back today, climbingin my window and getting eyeballedby my imaginary cat Spot.I think he sees Spot because theyseem to play. But, don't rely on thecrazy lady. I know the squirrel is...

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    I Kissed A Girl

    I Kissed A Girl (many times)...I kissed a girl and I liked it!Stop right there! Hey, Katy Perry...there was no cherry chapstick!This is about me - not you!We met in the ladies room...you may have heard a story.I wear...

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    • You’re amazing with your dialogue. Always enjoy your writing.

    • I accidentally posted this same submission under A Squirrel. It was pointed out to me and after figuring out how to edit – the right one is up now.
      I get loopy sometimes. I keep copies and cut and paste. It went bonkers, but it is corrected.

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    Moonlit Candlelight

    Moonlit screams as they ripple the air from the grave of a girl. Moonlit corpse as she appears through a blanket of mist.   Moonlit ghost as in life, she’s lost, angry, whispers secrets.   Candlelit giggles as she’s in the flesh her glinting emerald eyes....

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    Cancer

    Cancer:That verminous dreg of death! A maulerwho sucker-punches, spars,and destroyswith body blowsits challenger's ghostly form. Even money—unable to go the distancewith all its supremacy—gets outwittedand KO'd. With undefeated form,Cancer prevails far too often. Life's referee of remaining daysstands over another challengerand vigorously counts...

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    • Superb work. Love the boxing metaphor.

    • hello dearest Tim I hope they find a cure I cry everytime I see a St Judes comercial kids battling cancer my condolences on your family member 💕

    • Powerfully penned, Tim. Into the book it belongs! The boxing metaphor is clever, people fighting for their life are very familiar with pugilist philosophy. Because it is indeed a fight, and some defy the odds for a while, because they possess a fighters heart. Excellent work, so sorry for your loss. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Great write Tim and sorry for your loss.

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    sad girl

    a predisposition for depression swaymy feelings follow, and I was waylaidsuccumbing to the malady, I achesinister understanding, it would not alleviatethe darkness cloying devastateAnd in my compromised position, I vownot to placate people anymorethen swallow down my emotionsbecoming sorrowful...

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    • I suffered from it when I was younger for various reasons. Your poem spotlights it in an artistic way. Excellent poem crimsin.

      • hello dearest Tim I understand I suffer from it out of loneliness I can make friends I can’t keep them thank you for the lovely comment 💕

    • Powerful work. Tremendous.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. I have had problems keeping friends as well, I can totally relate. Superb write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest damian I think my problem lies in the inability to properly set boundaries and when I finally stand up for myself it’s with anger and people are taken aback I think if I set consistent boundaries from the start it woud be better my problem is I see good in everybody thank you for understanding 💕

    • Hello Brenda. Magnificent piece of writing here. So many suffer with loneliness and depression. It’s not a good feeling at all. Stellar work my friend. xo

      • hello dearest Keith good morning thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕

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