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Read MoreI wonder, after all these years,If she still considers herself luckyTo have landed a fishOf such colour and tenacity.Or,Does she now only seeFaded beautySans scales, sans colour, sans vitalityYet still attached to her hook?I ask myself the same questions...
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Read MoreThunder and Lightning Fateblack clouds over my life's tristesse Monotomy frustration and loneliness Silence hangs oppressive in the air Turning my suffering into despair Nature holds its breath, it's getting dark No bird sings, no wolf howls, no dog barks It's calm as in the beginning...
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Well that’s simply beautiful.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and appreciation, dear Peter!
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Beyond being so very literate, this poem simply glows with passion and gratitude. It gives me hope in humanity that such a person as you lives on the same beloved Earth as I. I feel very glad that you have experienced this and that I have at least a remote connection to your very special being, dear Elke. Warmly, Jim
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Your warm words make me blush, dear Jim! I am just an ordinary person like anyone else. We all belong to the human species. We were born on this planet in different appearance and with different attitudes. We should support one another instead of bringing us down and fighting us. Thanks a lot for your gracious comment!
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Absolutely – we are all artists and we all deserve love. 🙏💖
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There is a universe of emotion packed into this poem. When connection is made, miles mean nothing. Beautiful, Elke
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My deepest gratitude for your kind comment, dear Willow! A soul connection doesn’t depend on time or distance.
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Beautifully penned, Elke. Excellent write with such an honest message my friend. What a lovely tribute. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you from the bottom of my heart for your awesome comment, dear Damian!) I’m speechless…
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Lovely Elke. Your poem warms my heart. Beautiful.
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Brilliant work.
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Beautiful, Elke. Those flashes of lightning bring visions of delight! Love your craft and word play in this!
Daniel
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Chère E.,
Hope you’ll enjoy your weekend.As for your beautiful poem, I’m with Jim M. Your truly felt (feld?) emotions shine through in every sentence!
A stellar write!
Keep them coming please!I’ll be back tomorrow for another eyeful of beauty.
Warm regards, Gus
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Read MoreAwright, Pollywogs and wee tiny crabs Gather all around and hear me gab I'm spinnin' a yarn that's salty and true Get yer hands from ye pockets and quit playin' pool Now, Swabby Sam, he liked his rum And got real sloshed while choppin'...
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Oh, Sam, ewww! How could you! Didn’t you even think to include the delightful octopussy? Talk about a hand job! Wowzer!
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Thanks. Noooo, Swabby Sam wasn’t drunk enough to risk his gooey duck with no octopussy!
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Read MoreOne moment you are concious.The next half awake.One moment you are walking. The next you are in a lake.It feels like an endless loop.Of fatigue,exhaustion. As I watch the flowers grow.My eyelids slowly begin to fall.Because I spent my whole day...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with layers of depth my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Since I have not been posting because of work I am trying to give a little more. Thanks cuz
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Chère F.,
How can someone be powerful and sweet at the same time?
Lovely, what a lot of ‘tastes’ in one poem!Warm regards, Gus
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Thank you, Gus, for the compliment.
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and You my friend “stole” our interest and attention once again with your passionate and exquisite writing. I respect how each couplet both shows and tells us a story. Fantastic poem!
An espresso con panna to you.
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Thank you so much for that. Espresso con panna thank you Clay;))
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🙂
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Enough said with a smile. Thank you, Jim;))
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Oooh, very clever!
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Thank you, Willow :))
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Really like that ending, tight
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Thank you ME:))
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian