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Read MoreIn shadows of night the rose grows, the bloom, like a fist unclenching, petals soft as a whisper, against the wind's blow, holding its breath. As the moon spills gold into the shallow creek— with a scent of rain and...
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Thank you, my friend.
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People often say how beautiful and soft is a rose, but I always saw something deeper and here You’ve expressed it,That’s the strength of the rose, she stays kind in all the ugliness, she yeilds with the hardships… she grows with beauty even in the darkness. a power those only with pure hearts can acknowledge. Thank You for the lovely read my friend.
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Thank you for reading.
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Thank you, Damian.
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Read MoreIt's not Us vs Them.It's Us vs ourselves.The war starts and ends in our own minds. Labelling them "Them" turns us into Them.He's not Muslim. Not Republican. Not Black. Not gay.Just human. Labels are seeded at birth.Parents plant them.Media, culture, and...
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We are humans. I see it.
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. We are all just humans being. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fia and Damian
Thanks for reading.
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Well said and to the point. Nice work.
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Read MoreWhen we made love the first time,I was under a spell.I thought the magical vaginawould transport meto a kinder—more gentle—world.Some lessons comewith concreteand empty pockets.Conversations with ducksand feral catsdown by the river. That ass, those breasts—pure sorcery.I remember lying under...
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It must have been something to behold. Nice piece, Thomas.
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Thank you.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. Excellent storytelling my friend, I really dig the layers in your work my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Stirring stuff, Thomas! I felt I was there with you, with her, with her ass – knowing how tremendously realistic your delicious poetic fantasies tend to become mid-verse… it’s probably just as well that I wasn’t! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Thank you. You’re the best.
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So great Thomas. Nice work!
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Thank you.
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The flesh offers as many charms as does the bottle, Thomas, and pulls us through desperate times like nothing else: a respite and a jail, both with sweet, slick memories that can sustain as well as strangle life. Well written and remembered.
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Thanks, my friemd.
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I live how you brilliantly rounded this out – starting with the ass, and finishing with the ass. The darker, harsher, more gritty memories walking between the reminiscence of that ass. It teases with questions but in the kind of way that stirs the mind rather than leaving dissatisfied. Always that ass…
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lol Thanks
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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Monster
Teeth bared
He’s scared
His mind’s a mess
Trying to handle with finesse
But to no avail-this ship has sailed
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A laudable effort, Fia 👍
I love your imaginative theme and how you’ve creatively made this form your own with your unique touches that catch the reader’s mind’s-eye … enjoyably interesting and entertaining.
Having said that, I’ll also mention a couple of techy issues:
1. Syllable counts are out in L3 & 4 (should be 2/2), and L6 (should each be a…Read More
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This is an outstanding poem, dear Abbey! The imagery, the metaphors, the soothing atmosphere – everything is beautiful!