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Read MoreThe orb appeared in her eye at dusk. As she knew it would. Wobbling. Bobbling about. Like a dark beach ball balanced precariously on her wave of discontent. She placed her hands palms-down in her lap and stared at...
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Thank you, once again, for being so kind to me, Damian – it was a hard story to tell but you made all my efforts worthwhile, HJx
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Read MoreI knocked at your doorYou write beautiful poetryCan you inspire me meet herI do not write verses these daysIt does not rain on these barren landsYou showed me your secret writingsAnd I flutteredSaw my muse for millisecondsEnough for an...
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Love the depth and layers of this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Hugs and love.
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I like this, the question of wanting to meet her to be inspired. sweet
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Thank you Fia.
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Read MoreUnjust jealousyhas taken over meI cannot believethat you cannot seethat he is for me I will channel this rageas my pen flies across the pageThere is no smoke or sageThat will bless what is coming in spades You need to understandWhen...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian 😊
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hello beautiful Fia this is perfectly written and it’s true older women no more how to please a man I like an older man myself combined with a little arrogance great write ❤️
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🩷thank you crimsin
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Love the flow first. but also the attitude of claiming what’s yours. Tight
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Thank you Me 😉
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This is honest, real and demanding. Well said Fia.
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Thank you, Vision;)
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That flow and to the point understanding hit straight on
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Thank you, CasketSharpe;))
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I love this one, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus
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This is raw possession and feral confidence on the page—jealousy sharpened into language instead of apology.
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Thank you, Thomas
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I’m digging the attitude and confidence. Telling it like it is in your own sense of style.
Back off my man! This is fun to read and had a swag urban feel to it.
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Haha Thank you. I guess I was really feeling this piece
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That’s tellen her. When Fia lays down the law, watch out! lol Nice one. 🙂
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Well, thank you, Tim.
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“There’s something that comes with age and time” there is something about this line that speaks with stoicism and control which also lets a little leeway to catch a case.
I loved the underlying theme, she may try tempt him but you have his heart.
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Thank you, Wally;))
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This is a subtle warning huh. LOL.
You make it seem “nice” because it rhymes. But so does “sharp” and “harp” -which is what they will be playing when you finish them off. LOL.
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Thank you, Styxian;)) Not so subtle I guess
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This is dark and reminds me of something that could be a thriller movie
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good morning beautiful Fia thank you graciously it is just some of the spirits I encounter from time to time ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I appreciate you ❤️
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Harriet-Jacqui xx wrote a new post
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Read MoreI can tell that he is desperate, aching for something more than just a woman. Not just any woman. He’s searching for something primal that goes beyond attraction or companionship. He wants a woman like me, a creature driven...
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Passionately penned, HJ. Excellent storytelling my friend, you have a way with words.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Bless you, Damian xx
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It’s crazy what runs through your mind while reading this, at first it was black widow/vampire, stalker/serial killer, and by the end we was thinking of a movie “Species.” This is a reader magnet, what is she and what will happen? Tight
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You’ll just have to buy BEINGS to find out! I give away so much of my published writing here and on my website, and I seldom get time to write which I must do : BEINGS 2 or The Poignancy of Living. I greatly appreciate your reviews but have to warn everyone that I’m so busy with marketing and writing these days – my raisons d’etre – that I don’t have time to review you all!
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Powerfully penned, HJ. Excellent storytelling and crisp imagery my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian