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This was quite creative. How he… the conceited king shriveled and you arose to be queen and well replenished off him, haha. Love it!
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I can see your disappointed with men from this and your previous poems. Scars can go pretty deep and disappointment can be frustrating. But your expression is always deep in itself. That’s what writing is for.
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The night is also when the pain hits for me. I don’t know how it is for others but the older I get the more painful life becomes. More stressful and overwhelming. Guess getting help would be best, but I’m kinda the strong one that holds up my little world. No time for breakdowns.
*Hug* you’re not alone, friend.
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hello dearest Nick good morning I think as we get older because for one thing I know I was fearless and careless when I was younger..now I am careful and cautious understanding each moment is important thank you for the love here hugs on our shared pain in the night 💕
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write as always my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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good morning Damian I hope you have a beautiful day thank you my friend 💕
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Vivid and sharp.
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hello dearest Thomas good evening thank you graciously have a great night 💕
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Hoi hoi
There’s a theory, that says that the first 4 sentences determine if the reader wil go on reading. In other words, have you captured the attention.And sometimes insidious greed, the needful way one is enough.
Very nice write. Thank you!
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hello good morning dearest Gus I wasn’t writing yesterday and that line kept coming to mind just one line so I sat down and wrote it I’m happy it held your interest and you liked it great eye 💕
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This is wonderful, Brenda. The audio with it makes it come to life for the reader. I did not expect any less from you, of course!
Daniel
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hello dearest Daniel thank you graciously for the love on this write 💕it is deeply appreciated…
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Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you pardon my tardy response I appreciate you 💕
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I am glad it resonates with you.
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Thank you dear. You made my day.
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Read MoreI let myself bleed to breathe. I write out what I need to… Allowing myself to be lacerated by the world's harsh judgments, however, as I bleed, I begin to breathe! Ink bleeds out of my wounds onto the page, and I transcribe what...
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Danile this is fantastic always be yourself and I will to 💕
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Brenda, your comment makes me want to ask you to write a piece yourself with the same title! I’m curious and I’m sure I would love what you would create!
Daniel
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it’s funny I wrote a poem called breathe after you and before I saw yours we are on the same wavelength 😊
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Same wavelength of talent… a wavelength only the talented can see! 😉
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Your writing goes under my skin. Intense as if it was really written with heart blood. Perfectly written, Daniel!
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Vielen Dank, Elka! Fühlst du mein Schreiben unter deiner Haut? Das bedeutet, dass ich das erreicht habe, was ich mir hier gesetzt habe! You should see what I see behind my eyes so I can write like this! Hahaha!
Tschüss!
Daniel
Gotisch-Surrealistisch
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