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Read MoreIt’s cold in this time of the year And it reminds me of your hands There were no hands But there was some warmth Maybe from this thread of conversations Days of Q’s and A’s Days of exchanging stories, And some thoughts On how hearts can be...
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Thank you, Neville! I appreciate it “)
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It’s pieces like this gives food for thought, they seem to relate and then they don’t. Tight work dude
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Thank you! “)
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I do enjoy the back-and-forth of a conversation. The last line made me say, “Aww.”
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Thank you, Fia! Highly appreciated. “)
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Well written M.E The story was compelling and lovely in it’s delivery. Great job
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Thank you my friend! I appreciate it “)
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Cleverly penned, ME. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you brother! I appreciate you! “)
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I like that! Indeed it was both best and worst times. Thank you so much! “)
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This is much different than mainstream and I like it. Well written.
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This feels like intimacy remembered through frost — awkward, tender, human as hell.
The beauty is in the fractures: jokes, longing, missed timing, love that never quite learned how to land.
Quietly devastating, and honest enough to sting.
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Read MoreThis is your quick Sunday News We have started a new Forum called Collaboration. If you want to join and see if someone would like to collaborate with you that is the place to go. (Please try not to directly...
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It’s good to to be able to keep up with site developments, thanks again Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Great info Fia. Thanks!
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Thanks, Fia. You keep us all well informed my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Very cool
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Read MoreI am the mirror none can faceReflecting void, erasing traceThe self dissolves when it is soughtA shadow born of lightless thoughtI show the eyes that dare not seeThe truth behind identity No image forms, no frame remains Just fractured glass and...
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Thank you..sometimes the mirror reflects more than just our reflection..they show our true soul..something haunting and beautiful at the same time..thank you for the comment
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Phenomenally penned, Mstrmnd. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with precise detail and an amazing flow. Dare I say it’s very lyrical my friend. Dig this. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreMy childhood grocery storelooms legendaryIt had an enormous step on scalea dull light greenwith a long old-timey pointeraiming accusingly at oversizedtoo high numbersby 11 years oldscales were scaryMy childhood grocery store,Publix,had a big deli counterwe got some of our deli...
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Outstanding piece of writing Pinkdreams. I never walked into a Publix, since there not located in the NY tri-state area. Your memories and description of this store is unbelievable. The poem was done so well that as I began reading it, I knew and felt we were in the early to mid 70’s. The photo is also an extra bonus. As we get older, certain places and landmarks disappear. Our memories may fade a bit as well. At the same time, a certain item or smell may bring us back and reboot memories that were stuck somewhere in our brains decades ago. Nice work.
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VoI- Thank you so much for understanding, and for the nice praise. It means a lot to me.
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I enjoy poems or stories from people that can tap into their memories and write a compelling, nostalgic piece for that moment in time. You totally succeeded here.
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So good to hear from you. I think you did offer condolences back then, so thank you then and now.
Why did I think you lived in Texas? I’m so envious of those experiencing Fall and cold weather. 91 this afternoon in Phoenix. Stupid.
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Read MoreForty years of service Numbed by the whip Forty years of service Numbed and sick Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip You Gave all you had Gave all you had Gave all you had To the M.N.C Blind to the beauty Numbed by the whip
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Years of service and what do you have to show for it if that take it all away.
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Yes. I don’t think the system rewards people for working hard all their lives. We used to have a pension system and a retirement plan. Now you either work till you die, or retire into bankrupcy.
thanks for reading
regards
james
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thanks for reading. Sixteen tons by Tennesse Ford comes to mind.
Thanks for your words of strength.
Regards
James
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Thanks. I agree I have seen what hard work did to a man. He finally retired and then his illnesses began to destroy him fast. Sorry to get morbid. Thanks for reading
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What is the world coming to eh’ .. don’t let on, sometimes ignorance is bliss and anyway, I have yet to complete stocking the bunker 😎👍
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I am waiting for the aliens to come and see what a mess the rulers of this world have done with life.
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I reckon they know already and that’s why they haven’t sent more than just the scouting party .. 👍
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Captivating .. and most original .. I was hooked and played fairly and squarely from one end to the very other .. Indeed, I am glad I felt compelled to check in & stop by .. All Good Things and write on brother M.E .. Neville 😎👍