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Read MoreTHE AFFAIR Fat Agnes snitched. I knew she would.We saw Nick Smith kissing Pastor Roy's wife out by the dumpster between the church and the soup kitchen. They saw that we saw and begged usto let them gently tell Roy. I...
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Okay first stanza is the shocker.
Then you twisted it in the last stanza.
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I enjoyed this surprising tale. That darn Agnes!
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She’s appeared in two previous pieces. She’s the church bookkeeper who is stealing to fund her casino addiction.
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Read MoreNick's KnacksIt used to be called Cash Thrifts. It was a combination thrift store and pawn shop The police raid determined they sold drugs and guns and worse.Former Buffalonian Nick Smith, aprolific author under 20 names, boughtit in a...
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Saint Nick might have a fondness for other pastors wives….he’s human after all.
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I just posted part 2.
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I read this backward. I read the second piece before this. Now it makes sense. lol No Sparks,,yeah right
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Read MoreThe sun rose with a sweet scentMy death is callingYou cannot cheat deathThree lines down an arm proves it The moon runsAs the candy corn colored sky emergesEscape is not an optionThe knives have been sharpened I am not the first...
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Powerful stuff Fia
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Thank you,Peter;))
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Fantastic work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you, Thomas;))
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Heartfelt in a new way
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Thank you, Jim;))
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“The liver
The spleen
Rip out the intestines
Making me his queen”Amazing writing Fia.
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Thank you, Drieks
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Nice and dark Fia. I love the candy corn colored sky emerges line.
Death takes its bride one organ at a time. Sounds like horror to me and a good one for the halloween season. 🙂-
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Thank you, Tim. I had fun doing this one. The candy corn was a nice touch. Did a challenge with Twofiftythree. We had to write gore, and you have to add candy corn
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Hauntingly penned, Fia. Look at you writing horror, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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I am trying. I’m a complete chicken. Love vampires, werewolves etc….
Thank you, Damian;))
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Violent imagery & language apropos for an October horror film marathon. I’ve got some catching up to do, fer sure. Thanks for holding it down here at Stars Rite. Much appreciated!
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There are a lot of writers getting in the spirit of it.
Thank you, Benjamin
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Honest, morbid and great wording. A gorgeous piece, dear Fia!
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Thank you so much, Sappho
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It builds with a violent intensity.
Very apt for Halloween. But also death is always with us. All year round. You poem is very truthful.
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Thank you, Knight 🩷
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Your reflections on this conversation with death are the stuff of great poetry. Your poem is deeply felt and strong in imagery that is as poetic as it is strong. Truly a great poem.
John
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Thank you, John 🩷
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hello beautiful Fia powerful dark here but empowering too ❤️
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Drieks wrote a new post
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Read MoreI Indiana Jones'd my depressionWith fake smiles and aggressionNo spores of joy in sight to teach me counter lessonsSporadic sessions of anxiety suppressionAnother forced excursion to divert the world from questioningIn actualityThis evil king is suppressing meBut in a...
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This had me moving. The riff is good, and the music went well with it.
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Always a pleasure to read your opinion Fia! Thank you so much!
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Your arrangements always fit your words tightly. Excellent work.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you for the kind words Damian!
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Oh Lordy! You’ve done it again.
It’s like you know what melody/hook to use depending on the tone of the lyrics.
Where to emphasize your message. I listened to this when you posted but didn’t know how to reply.
I was at a loss of words! That is rare! Hahaha
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Thank you Adelphina! It’s a lot of trial and error but I warms my heart to hear people appreciate it. I’ll keep at it and hope to keep improving along the way. Have a wonderful day!
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Thank you! ❤️
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You’re a beast at this thing Lady, to freaking Tight
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Thank you! More coming in a few days (hopefully)
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This i awesome. I somehow talked Fia into getting a Spoken Word group going (actually, I kind of bamboozled her into it). HER wants to join and she suggested we get Willow and you as well. After listening to this, I feel really out of my league. I’m a lifelong entertainer, but mostly in theater. When I started writing for performance, I had no music, just me, so that’s what I’ve been doing. But you would bring some real class to the group, and if we do this right, we can build something outstanding for all of us. Interested?
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Hey, what happened to the audio? I sent a link to this page to a friend and he told me no song was here, so I came back — and it’s gone! Please put it back.
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Apparently because of an update on the site, all audio on all posts got removed sadly. I hope I have time tomorrow to upload the audio again on all my songs.
In the meantime you can listen to the songs on my YouTube channel if you’d like: youtube.com/@Drieks
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That I would like. So tell me, would you like to join the Spoken Word Group? You would be a very welcome member, and I think we can all benefit from each other.
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Read MoreGODDESS ON GODDESS Four large breasts bang together. Smacks not unlike balls slapping furiously on plump ass cheeks!But no men are ever allowed. EVER!They are locked out! Men are putrid. Today is only for the "great" women. Their rubenesque curves make...
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Oh this is hot. The wrist inside Tara brought her to climax. Yup very potent and erotic write. love it
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Thanks so much.
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Classic…..made me giggle.
I thought you loved me….brilliant