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Read Morethe Player in the pool,envious of deep frolickers. splashy sounds turn heads.momentary nods abide.turned again,bobbers miss the wavethat sweeps the lowthe Player plays naught nowembraces sharky mermaidswho hate the taste of fake meat: spam that spams the spammer til he...
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Read Moreturn up the heat this is just getting gooda hex is upon my lipsa promise is spilling from my hipstwisted sorrow, a cunted cursesulking in the shadows never to beholdsacrifice sanity and get in the moodaltered faith in your...
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously good evening ❤️
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Read MoreScrunch your body of work inside my arterial gallery, scrimshaw shotgun breaths double-barrelled into every bone Pearly dew drops peel drought from land, my hands act as gutters brushing rain o’er skin, gulping moisture before it sinks under the ground At the end of the ellipsis webs hang...
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Quality write
Says a lot within a short amount of wordsLike
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Diolch Gary. Always good to receive a PS Like.
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I agree with Gary. It is a bit different from the norm too. Your choices of wording are unique and powerful once it is all built into a poem like this.
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Thank you Mark. It’s good to see some of the DU crew in this portal.
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I love how the poem blends physicality and emotion, making each gesture feel tender and intense, with a haunting, lingering echo in the final lines.
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Many thanks Roma. Such comments make scribbling worthwhile.
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Read MoreOwls,so pretty and smart.When they fly,they steal my heart.With fluffy necks,wings and specks. With feathers so delicate and divine.Hoot,one says.Hoot,says another. That's why owls help defeat cold and fire.They spread their wings and fly.Over to things they see,can't deny. They soar up...
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Read MoreSometimes She Just Cries sometimes, she shouts just get out .. when she really means don’t let go .. then afterwards, when the sweat is gone and the tears have all dried .. she has on occasion been known to just cry hey babe, now...
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We are emotional creatures!
I might be guilty of this. 😁-
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Bless you my friend .. Neville 😎👍
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Tremendous work, my friend.
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Cheers Thomas .. Neville
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Beautifully penned, Neville. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks a ton Damian .. Muchly appreciated sir .. Neville
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Ah, the contradictions of a lover’s heart. Love is indeed complicated, but, yes, it is so much fun to “hold on”. To actually feel the need and confusion within them, to love them. Really a nice poem, Neville.
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Many serious thank you’s my fine literary friend .. Neville 😎👍
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Lol I remember reading this. let’s agree that many times the only weapon we can have against You is “tears”😁. We women can be too complicated for you, I admit this, yet we both should accept each others natural differences to live happily after 😄💖✨😎 love this little scribble here, and please don’t get annoyed and forgive our playful nature 😉
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Ha .. I can’t remember the last time I got really annoyed other than with myself over something .. but other than that, I always tend to agree with your every word my very dearest Light 💕😎⭐👍
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian