I like the way you used the age intertwined with what is happening to you.

I love it, Brenda.

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

wonderful work my dear crim. always aspiring.

Perfection is your middle name. Excellent. xox

Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. By the way you forgot an r in your title. Appreciate you.

Damian

Beautiful work.

That last line had me sighing. Really nice work, Crimsin

Amazing! Can feel every word in this poem. xo

A goody

Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Another excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you Damian.

That is sweet. Can you imagine your heart beating hoping it was from that person.

I once found a folded up love poem along the side of a road. Perhaps someone has thrown it out the car window.
It was actually written really well. I wrote a reply to it, although I had no idea who wrote the first one, or who it was to. I just felt like it deserved an answer. Too bad they never knew that a writer had found their poem. It wasn’t written for nothing after all.
Your little poem here brings back that memory for me. So thank you for your poem, it too has meaning to us readers.