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Read MoreMy father wrote this for my mum.Ive always loved the simplicity of it and thought it was worth sharing.
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As far as I know he wrote it.
He was a Doctor of Philosophy so surely he wouldn’t lie to his son.
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Dear P,
I really appreciated dreaminess of this piece. It has a great meter and I liked the plot twist at the end. It reminds me no matter what we are in life there’s a poet in all of us. Lovely share. H🌷
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Thanks for the kind reply Honoria
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I’m loving that this was captured so honestly and with simplicity that makes it very special. Thank you for sharing. Those are treasures that must be kept in the family for a long long time.
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian ❤️
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Dear B,
I can really appreciate the prayer in this poem. Being engulfed in God’s love and safety is such a great theme. A much needed reminder as we traverse this messy earth. H🌷
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hello beautiful Honoria so great to see you…you know I didn’t see the prayer within until you pointed it out just beautiful thank you graciously ❤️
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A woman in love with the monster detonates. That wonderful imagery. What an explosion. Love this
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hello lovely Fia good afternoon thank you graciously I deeply appreciate your thoughts ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Absolutely amazing imagery and a stellar write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThere’s a buzzing in my ear which screams at me to do something. Be something! Create something! Sing something! Eat something! There’s a banging in my ear which tells me to wish for something. Wish for friendship! Wish for love! Wish for your magnus opus! Wish for courage! There’s a humming...
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This is “super.”
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Hoi hoi @Sunny,
I’m not a Native speaker, so I’ll come back tomorrow for a full eye full of beauty!
I’ll be giving myself time to digest.
See you then!
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This is good. It feels like your words are tumbling from your mind without stopping.
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Thank you so much, Fia! My intention was to express a hyperactive mind which follows alongside the youth. ^^
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I really like this.
If everyone just sits and listens, eventually they will hear a sound beneath all sound.It is a gentle ringing in the ears,not tinutus.Its the sound of silence,the sound of the universe, maybe even the sound of God.
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Beautifully penned, Sunny. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear S,
The frenetic energy of doing, getting, being, all at an unreasonable tempo is prevalent in this write. It made me think if only we did things at a slower pace to realize all the aspects of life’s lessons. Alas, all but a pipe dream. Terrific write.
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Thank you for the review, H! I agree– If we stop to take a look around once in a while, we can truly embrace all what life has to offer, but we are constantly attempting to race against time itself. A slow life is a nice life, a fast life is an exciting one. A mixture of both is wondrous!
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He wrote that? It’s really good.