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Read MoreWhen I look in the mirror I see more graysAs if the days whizzed by a little too fastEvery wrinkle I see appearing on my faceFeel like secrets and information amassed Many reflections seem like they are distant viewsLike watching...
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Thank you Rosie. I think sometimes some folks have older souls, relating to others which gives us more depth and insight.
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Thank you for the warm welcome.
Take your time. I look forward to it. x
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Thanks for reading and commenting Damian. We’ve been through a lot so we know we can endure.
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Thank you reading and commenting.
Capture those moments for posterity also helps us reflect inward, to make better decisions in the future.
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I regret not having read this, your latest dollop of smut, earlier, CS! HJx
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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![Profile picture of NAAJIR]()
Haha!!! One of the realest testimonies [poems] I’ve ever read
Real talk on both ends [perspectives]
Dope shit and much neededMuch respect
Naaj
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We all have traveled that road of regret. And some are still on it with no off ramp.
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This has some unexpected twists and turns.
But it is indeed, a reality check for some.
If only she had fertility issues. It wouldn’t be a nightmare unfolding. x
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Twist and turns in the process of regret can lead to negativity.
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That’s true.
Some difficult circumstances to overcome.
I admire the originality of the piece. And how it is so realistic.
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I have lived it many times throughout my life. Now being older, wisdom has prevented me from making some of the same mistakes.
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That’s the best way.
Let some other fool be the victim.
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That’s a funny and truthful poem! Well written!! Thanks!
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One of those hard truths in life many learn.
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Yeah.. a lesson you have to experience to learn.. :^/
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Read MoreOh, come to me my love in the bluest of the night sky The stars are in jubilation of our union The depth and swells of the ocean Rise in approval Oh, come and not fear The strength of the lightening as our hands touch The...
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you. Damian :))
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This kinda rocks in a deliciously love poem kinda way .. fingers crossed for the future .. Neville
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I will keep them crossed for those who are about to venture down that path. Thank you Neville.
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Dope!! ’nuff said!!
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you Naaj;))
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Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)
And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
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Thank you so much Duhsjaak
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This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one
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Thank you Willow. That means a lot;)
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Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.
John
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Thank you John;) That put a smile on my face;)
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Well done and beautiful work
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Thank you, Lizz;))
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Angel Louise wrote a new post
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Read Morebeauty…is in the eye of the beholder…so they say…“as if” my thoughts cajoled herbrilliant…is the glow of her presence for all to seeexuding a celestial essencetonight…an umbra accentuates her pirouettefor one dance onlya stunningly deep red silhouette shimmering…is the veil...
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Beautifully penned, Angel. Excellent write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian, thanks for the appreciative welcome. I see you have posted a lot of material on your page. I look forward to reading some of your work.
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I like the way you start off every stanza with a single word and build on it. Lovely work. Welcome to Stars Rite
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Fia, thanks for the welcome. Your words are kind. Yes, the single words are different than how others would write their poetry. For me, it creates a pause to help focus on the feelings and emotions I’m trying to express.
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Chère A.,
Welcome to this (Fia’s) corner of heaven.
Your verse form is very suitable for setting to music. To use as lyrics I mean.Maybe…
In the future?But for now, what a way to start!
If you’re American: thank you.
In all other cases: keep them coming please.Kind regards, Gus
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Duhsjaak, thanks for your welcoming comments. Most of my writing is based on interpretation of musical melody and song lyrics. I’ve never actually thought of my poems as song before. That is an interesting consideration.
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I thourghly enjoyed this and welcome to Stars.
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Atticus, thanks for your welcome. I am happy you enjoyed my celestial interpretation of the Eagles song.
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