Oh, come to me my love
in the bluest of the night sky
The stars are in jubilation of our union
The depth and swells of the ocean
Rise in approval
Oh, come and not fear
The strength of the lightening as our hands touch
The symphonic rumble of the bass drum hidden in the clouds
It reverberates into the ground
Alerting all you are mine
Oh, come to me and me alone
Tender and gentle as whisp of clouds dance across your skin
For you see the earth rejoices
Letting its inhabitants know
What is joined as one will stay as one till the end of all we know is gone
Beautifully penned, Fia. This had such an uplifting vibe my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
Thank you. Damian :))
This kinda rocks in a deliciously love poem kinda way .. fingers crossed for the future .. Neville
I will keep them crossed for those who are about to venture down that path. Thank you Neville.
Dope!! ’nuff said!!
Much respect
Naaj
Thank you Naaj;))
Chère F.,
A subtle prayer
A declaration of love
Is all that I am
Thinking of….
You are a class of/on your own (what do I know of your language?)
And this question answer format is a beautiful find.
Needless to say I love it to bits.
Warm regards, Gus
Thank you so much Duhsjaak
This reminds me of classic poetry from the early 1900’s. It has that feel and language. Nice one,, Fia.
Thank you, Tim;))
This is such a sigh-worthy piece. I think most of us embark on that journey with these hopes. For some, it lasts. For others…not so much. I love the fierce optimism in this one
Thank you Willow. That means a lot;)
Fia, this is a jubilant celebration of love that you paint with lyrical wonder. I enjoyed this so much my heart sang as I read. You really made me so happy reading this tonight. I am rejoicing through the magic of your poetic and loving poem of an eternal flame that cannot be extinguished.
John
Thank you John;) That put a smile on my face;)
Well done and beautiful work
Thank you, Lizz;))