The last line lands in a way that makes you want to reread this again, and let it linger. This caught my breath.

This reads almost like an invocation, a chant of summoning. Much enjoyed this. As Brandon said, it invites rereading 🧡

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with dark undertones my friend. I concur with Willow and Brandon. Amazing read. Appreciate you.

Damian

To cool and it’s relatable to all that write, tight

Chère L.,
Beauty.
The Chinese version:
Beauty in the woods, where no one can hear it, is still beautiful

The greater Amsterdam version:
Beauty which is shared with other people, grows

It’s almost akin to:
Sometimes giving away makes me richer.
All this and more you gave us with this wonderful post.

If you’re American: Thank you very much
In all other cases: (please) keep on keeping on (Curtis Mayfield)
Kind regards, Gus

Powerfully penned, Lizz. Excellent write nicely transformed into lyrics my friend. It’s the little differences between the two that gives them each their own personality, while mirroring each other’s point in substance. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thanks 😊

I have to agree with Damian.. he says it best! 😉

Thank you 😊

Im so sorry to hear you’re going through all of that. You want you write horror go ahead. There are a few people on here that love it.

It wouldn’t be all horror.

First reading of your predicament, super sorry to read of this. But hopefully your surgeries are successful and we get a new Paula with a totally new poetic vision.