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Read MoreI was not made for these times.The world is too fasttoo noisytoo everything for my liking.Enough is no longer enough. I miss unsealed roadstrees and corner storeshomes not housesthe smell of dads aftershavethe way mum 'made do' with everything I...
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Thanks Ruby for your thoughtful and considered comment.
There are so many things now that are better than before but peace in ourselves is not one of them.
😘
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Read MoreWriting is deep thought Analogous to amphibious activities into depths of deep seas Having a window to penetrate what lies below before the need to breathe Making for the skies above Everything we did we did for love Where the sun broke the clouds in the skies above Everything we did we did for love Ink spill a Rorschach of Holy diver staying alive by being alive being alive by being...
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This is amazing. I felt this in my core
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Powerfully penned, Cipher. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I love the amphibian analogy, Cipher. The geography of your piece is appealing. Here’s to your journey down below!
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The self affirmation in this is brilliant. The cause is so familiar & aching. Fill your cup back up. Time for your own nourishment
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Life is lessons learned. Is the cup half empty or half full? Totally one’s perspective. Has the cup been emptied or is it ready to be refilled? 🌼
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Please don’t be sorry, it was by choice. But now we’ve parted and I’m happy for it. We’re both in new chapters of our lives and I’m happy for it. But it’s so nice I have someone new in my life to pour into
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Powerfully penned, SW. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you by the way
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Read MoreHow it can come about so suddenly, hopelessness.Looking for meaning and only finding meaninglessness, seeming.Somewhere inside blackness to blackness, lacking dreaming.Remembering abysses screaming, when last attempting to wish, inside of this.Thinkers sinking into brinks, creeping into leaps.Ink that seeps...
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You write great imagery, Cipher!
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Read MoreBloodshot eyes stare wildly Just looking for a reasonChemicals come on mildly Within the mystic season Watching stars drift slowlyI cast my gaze inwardWalking amongst the lowlyMy skin feels awkward Panic races through fearWalking across the wireMuted sound going clearAs my pulse spikes...
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Pills are dangerous. This piece was written with power & a great performance here. Well done!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That they are, I know from experience. Appreciate you.
Damian
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How seductive the call of pharmaceuticals. Health, happiness, sanity.. all disintegrated by one seemingly harmless cure.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Detritus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They’d have you think, they wanna get people hooked. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I am sure he would be impressed by your ability to adapt to his style, which is not easy. This has a good flow and rapid pace
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I released it on DU, he commented on it, I think it was with approval. lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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He does have a machine gun style, doesn’t he? Quick bites! It doesn’t seem to matter what style you’re using, you always manage to bring it home on point, my friend
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well thank you, I try, I try. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He saw it on DU, I think he approved, if I remember right. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I like this style. Reminds me of a poet I knew. I think his name was JustDave. He had a bit of this style as well. Great ink.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool, yeah I’ve seen this style around a few times. Not too often though. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I really like this! Most of us don’t really soak in life how we used to before we had the world in the palm of our hands & information, entertainment & the pretense of connection at our fingertips. Really LIVING a moment has to be much more intentional—a disciplined decision now.