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Late night musing. Been going through the vault lately trying to organize it a little better. This write is in the style of Pete (Pete_25). My attempt at his style that is, he is much smoother than I. By his style I mean the quick rapid-fire lines. Cheers, Pete. Appreciate you. - Damian DeadLove

Bloodshot eyes stare wildly 

Just looking for a reason

Chemicals come on mildly 

Within the mystic season

 

Watching stars drift slowly

I cast my gaze inward

Walking amongst the lowly

My skin feels awkward

 

Panic races through fear

Walking across the wire

Muted sound going clear

As my pulse spikes higher

 

Crash off the fucking cliff

Connection has went offline 

All my limbs growing stiff

On prescriptions I dine

 

For whatever makes us ill

They’ll invent another pill

 

 

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      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Detritus. So glad you connected with the write my friend. They’d have you think, they wanna get people hooked. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I released it on DU, he commented on it, I think it was with approval. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    1. Excellent spill, Damian. Pete would be thrilled!

      This is raw reality and has superb flow. I’d love to see more of this style poetry on your pages. Your writing never disappoints. Have a fantastic day!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He saw it on DU, I think he approved, if I remember right. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    2. He does have a machine gun style, doesn’t he? Quick bites! It doesn’t seem to matter what style you’re using, you always manage to bring it home on point, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Cool, yeah I’ve seen this style around a few times. Not too often though. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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