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A parallel universe created to endure

until death do you part 

It’s warm enough to maintain and

passionless such that blame can be diverted

oh, please!

well remembered the electricity of that touch, the look that needed no words…

and now-

just polite mundanity 

with only the buzzing sound of all connection lost

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    1. Hi H!
      I’m so exited to see you posted!
      As for the write –
      Until death do you part. The sacred marriage vow that should withstand time.
      I love how you blended that phrase with our modern society and how our moods can so easily change.

      Brilliant writing amiga!

      • Dear A,

        Thank you so much for your lovely comment. I really appreciate this insight. I was kind of annoyed when I wrote it. Suffered over it then said “F” it. Post. Always blessed to receive your positive energy my way! Thank you again. H 🌷

    2. hello beautiful Honoria I’m so happy to see you damn the mundaity I’m sending an electic pulse your way no satelites or connection needed… smile lovely one great write ❤️

      • Dear B,

        You know I’m always gonna take those warm pulses from you! Your gift just made me smile for reals! Thank you very much for your lovely comment. Back at ya. Xx H 🌷

      • Dear D,

        I’m humbled by your kind comment. Thank you so much for your thoughtful encouragement. It’s always wonderful to see you and thank you once again. H🌷

    3. Adding to the applause, I am.
      So strong in the few words you’ve used. Like some rocks and a sling. Precision is power.
      Great to see you contributing some of your high value here. We thank you for it!

    4. How lovely to read you again!

      The internet and everything we’ve said on it will outlast us all, at least until a good solar flare takes it out. I’m not sure how to feel about that… well anyway, you made me think, and I like that. 😊 Great write.
      ❤️k

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