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Damian DeadLove wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

D Minor

Poetry

April 17, 2025

17

Candlelight flickers against a dark ceiling Another tequila shot with a beer backer Writing blunt words forecasting a feeling This ink that stains the page like lacquer Miserable vibes eating from the inside out Spiraling deeper into famine and...

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- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  D minor is like most minor chords a wee bit sad.I like diminished chords which kind of fit between sadness and happiness.
  
  Good write dude.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. Glad you connected with the write my friend. I’ve always liked D minor, Neil Young wrote quite a few. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Angels
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  This is something different from what I have been reading here. I like it.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Angels. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  hello dearest Damian that refrain about not knowing whose real and being an opening for the headliner really struck my I could feel the emotion there this is powerful 💕
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I liked those lines a lot as well. I always have lines in writes, that I like a lot. lol. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Tremendous work, my friend.
  - Damian DeadLove
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Appreciate you.
    
    Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Patricia. So glad you enjoyed the write my friend. I can hold my own, and am always exposing truth. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adira. So glad you enjoyed the write. Thank you for the compliment. Really means a lot to me. I love your take my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. Glad you enjoyed the read my friend. Nothing wrong with opening, you played that’s what matters. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Cool piece Damian. Love the D minor chord.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Would You?

Poetry

April 17, 2025

10

Would you take my handTake a chanceTo fall inLoveWould you spend a momentTo consider thatI may beYoursWould this be your only chanceTo have whatWas meantEternally

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10 Comments
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  In a heartbeat…
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Peter
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Beautifully penned, Fia. Seductive read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Beautiful work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas;))
- Nick DC
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Have to take leaps to get that loving devotion. Wonderful ink, friend.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you Nick😊
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  What a lovely offer within the stanzas of this poem. Everlasting love. Romance poems are the best poems! Especially when there’s a sense of longing for someone who isn’t yours yet. Sweet write, Fia, as always.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you , Daniel 😊
Broom wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Self Awareness

Poetry

April 17, 2025

12

Who you are with does not define who you are. Rather it defines who you can become, from the rubble...

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7 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Cleverly penned, Zazzles. A great read my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Broom
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Hello Damian, nice to see you ☺️ thank you I appreciate you too☺️
    Jackie
- Crimsin
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  beautiful wisdome lovely one I still struggle 💕
  - Broom
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Yeah the struggle is real, that’s for sure Brenda. Love you girl.
    Jackie ❤️
- Broom
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Good morning Adira , i just feel that people are to quick to judge. Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate you.
  Jackie ☺️
- Average Joe
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Too many are lost in the mirror with self doubts. Doubt your doubts and believe your dreams 🌼
  - Broom
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thank you Joe ☺️ good to see you xo
Visions_of_Insanity wrote a new post

• 1 year, 4 months ago

Necroslut

Poetry

April 17, 2025

4

She’s a speed freakA lunatic whoreOften called a horny hagShe’ll fuck-face the deadNecroslutMultiple lobotomiesDoomsday inside her headSwimming in tormentSuicideReleasing her from anguish

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3 Comments
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  No it’s not. Thanks!
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 4 months ago
  
  Wow. Powerful work.
  - Visions_of_Insanity
    1 year, 4 months ago
    
    Thanks Thomas
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