hello dearest Daniel you are still lucid this is really great at expressing what you hear ❤️

Brilliantly penned, Daniel. Another powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Spiritually provoking

Totally vibed this

Much respect

Naaj

I’m never away. You can find me underneath your bed. Waiting patiently. Sweet poem Meg.

This is beautiful and I can see why you could want endless sleep.

All of a sudden I can’t open my eyes anymore… yup definitely a witch 🧙

Excellent write..thank you for sharing

I’m going to go have a little nap now….not post coital but a nap nonetheless.💋

I couldn’t leave you out… succubus.

Gee, Lady-Poet 🥀🐝

With such eloquent skill you’re blessed; and, this gorgeous Kyrielle Sonnet, laid in perfect iambic tetrameter and revealing refrains, proves it ~ ohhh-so brilliantly!

What else to say when you’re away,
but that my dreams are all of You.
When every motion’s set a-sway …
warmth undulates me all night through.

“Last night, you came inside my dream.
Though, desert heat would have us keep
our love apart, you poured a stream
and left me wanting endless sleep.” (MM-mmm!)

Herein, Dear Poetess, fraught with vivid imagery, emotive lure, smooth as silk diction, and metaphor to turn the most masterful bard green with envy, you’ve word-painted us a dream to build ‘n hold onto.

Excuse me, please, I feel the fantasy pillow softly calling my name! ⁓ Rascal✨

Longing ‘twined with love and lust was palpable. Plus I totally loved the refrain at the end which tied it together perfectly. Well felt writing, Mistress Kitten!

Beautiful. Dreamy and relatable.

Your sweetness melts me.
Thanks for stroking me girl…
Can you hear me purr?

I agree with this. Closer we come to death, the more memories are reminders. Nice

Powerfully penned, Daniel. This is an incredible write my friend. When confronted with mortality most people analyze how they got where they are, afraid of losing memories, or becoming ill, or even death. Most fear losing their identity or remembering who or how they were. It gives me chills just talking about it, because it’s unimaginable in my head. Sorry for rambling my friend. This is a write that makes me think, thanks so much for sharing. Now I will ponder more by myself. Appreciate you.

Damian

This..this is..uplifting!

Cleverly penned, Keith. I knew there was going to be a corpse in this write my friend. I just knew it, I was going with buried in the basement. But you had her right out in the open. The Dr. Seuss of horror my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Hmmm, caught me. I knew something was up lol, The day was too perfect, nice.

Great! Here it is again – the brilliantly sarcastic humor you are famous for! This day was simply too perfect. There had to be a twist. Perfectly written, my friend! I enjoyed reading very much.

hello dearest Keith I was perplexed when you said your girl so affectionately what an awesome day except for the smell beauty with a twist great write ❤️

I was waiting for it!! This time I was prepared, too nice, too clean of a day. I love it Keith. Well written, you do my head in every time!! xx
~P.G💋