-
![Profile picture of Daniel Long]()
Daniel Long wrote a new post
![]()
Read MoreYour soul has withered, your conscience dead, your eyes don't cry, you have a heart of ice, your face so pale, so clammy everywhere, every word you utter to me filled with vulgarity... gives me violent shivers... Why vicious? You stole my heart and never gave it back, still you try...
2 Comments-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Daniel. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Drieks changed their profile picture
![]()
-
-
![Profile picture of M.E]()
I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you for taking time to read and comment M.E!
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Powerful work.
-
-
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Absolutely Awesome! Wow!
The phrases I love… “Sinful Redemption” (A paradoxical escape from salvation)
“secreting the nights away” (A novel spin from noun to verb – clandestine and furtive)
“your truth my undoing” (The curse of understanding)Just an amazing piece of work, girl.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Meg good afternoon thank you graciously for such a great review 💕
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good afternoon dearest Damian thank you graciously I deeply appreciate you 💕
-
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Amazing piece Crimsin!
Razor sharp ink.-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello good afternoon dearest poet thank you graciously 💕
-
-
![Profile picture of NAAJIR]()
You’re crushing it, Brenda!!! Luvin it!!!!
Naaj
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hi there dearest Naajir good afternoon thank you graciously for a lovely response 💕
-
-
![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Tremendous work. Vivid and sharp.
-
![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Thomas good afternoon thank you for such a beautiful comment 💕
-
-
-
-
![Profile picture of DampKitten]()
Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Thank you! Happy to make you glow haha.
-
-
![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
-
![Profile picture of Drieks]()
Wow, thank you Damian. That really means a lot to me!
-
-
- Load More Posts
Stars Rite a free online self publishing & social platform. A place for writers & readers to connect. Read Write Publish Stories Poetry Articles & Books. Create Ai generated covers for your stories & poems.
Copyright Stars Rite 2026
Bold… resonating write…