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Read MoreBizarre delusions painted upon my life’s canvas. Psychosis dripping with striking dreaminess. Amidst wispy clouds loom romantic castles. A bodiless poet with fleshly hands scribing wild, surrealistic thoughts. Brushing hallucinations within a utopian mind.
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Read MoreThat bubble of a moon isplaying peek-a-boo behindthe wispy night sky.Confirming to meeveryone's lunacy.Words stick to theroof of my mouthlike peanut butter.It could have beena better world,I should have been abetter man.January snowflakesare like guilt falling fromthe sky.little frozen...
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Thank you, my friend.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Thomas. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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We’ve all got some guilt stuffed somewhere in our suitcase. I’ve got plenty of it on my sleeve. I just cover it up best I can and wear a good jacket those guilt flakes can slide off.
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Thanks, Tim. I appreciate it.
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I was caught by the title, I love the word “raw” and one of my poems are titled “raw”. Your title is powerful… and in your short poem You expressed the numbness, the despair, the coldness that lives within boldly. One of the toughest lessons humans must learn, that we are enough as we are.
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Thank you.
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Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂
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hello dearest Tim thank you graciously I’m happy you felt the magic❤
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First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
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hello dearest Jacob thank you graciously yeah I meant summon…lol ❤️
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Powerful work. You nailed it.
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thank you graciously dearest Thomas ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morei picked herlike a novelthe cover waseye catchingexquisitei would startto read her in depthbut not finishso i'd start again laterthen againthen againwe marriedand i discoveredi should have finishedor at leastread the plotor table of contentsi had no ideawhat i...
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Hahah You needed Cliff Notes to read the book. This is good.;))
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Lol you ain’t lyin, Fia. :)))) Thanks.
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Book covers are meant to draw you in even if the book itself is rubbish.
I used to plough through books even if they were rubbish….not now.I give them about two chapters.If they haven’t got me by then,it’s arrivederci.
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Thanks for the comment, Peter. 🙂
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I have three books I would like to return. Is that possible.
I must have missed something in those synopses.
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That’s a lot of money spent, J. 🙂 They must have been horror books. lol thanks.
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Reading has its dangers lol. Can’t help feeling this poem is going to be relatable to many. Made me smile you did Tim.
Chris
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lol Thanks for the comment, Chris. :))
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Clever, funny, and painfully relatable – This is the kind of truth you laugh at because it hurts a little. haha
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I appreciate the comment, RomaJ. Thanks. :))
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So you didn’t read any articles, you just looked at the pictures…LOL
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lol yeah pretty much. 🙂 Thanks for the comment, Styx.
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks very much, Damian. 🙂
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So true! A 20 yr old boy at my local market goes on and on about the girl he is going to marry. They met on the Internet a few months ago and met up in person twice. You can’t suggest he slow down. So often, we think we know it all. I was going to be happy when I escaped my .
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I really appreciate your comment, Paula. I assumed you didn’t like anything I wrote. 🙂
Yes, some guys are too lost in the fantasy world to see what’s really there. Life will splash some cold water in their face when it’s too late.Sorry about your hubby and mom. I know it’s hard to get over that or forget. My mother was an alcoholic. I’ve had some horror in my life to.
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I love this. I never read in depth the outline of the or their stories either. A great metaphor you gave loved it 😍
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Thanks so much, Julie. Much appreciated. 🙂
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Superb work, my friend.
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Thank you, Thomas. 🙂
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