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Read MoreThe Soft Clatter of Loveand Old Tin Spoons at Midnight:The Unsaid Poetry of Home I love Central Park in the Fall. The city feels fresher and cleaner for some reason. As I walked past the Zoo, I heard a...
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Thank you so much Thomas. This is a story I wrote years ago but fine tuned recently. Very glad you enjoyed it, my friend.
John
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I enjoy the way you put your stories together. The way you summed it up ” the soft clatter of love and old tin spoons at midnight which was the unsaid poetry of home.” put a smile on my face
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Thank you so much Fia for reading this and your comment. Indeed, I like the way that last line summed it up too. Very glad you enjoyed. Most grateful for your read. And love that you enjoy the way my stories are put together and that the last line made you smile.
John
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Read MoreCoffee Shop Chanteuse sweet Bourbon necklacelaced in cappuccino embersof lost quiet moonshinedeep in pirate alley kisseswhen Luna rides her stallionhigh in the heat of summer skyover spired flames of starsthat burn in a rhapsodyof dark river chicorywhose smoke swirls in...
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Sweet descriptive piece with hints of longing
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Thanks so much my friend. This lady was singing old jazz songs at the coffee shop today. She was my muse.
John
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Hello John,
Your description here captures the atmosphere so perfectly. Your detail is always so razor sharp. Nice work.
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Deep gratitude Visions. I thank you from my heart and soul. Love that you appreciated my evocation of atmosphere through details. Great thanks.
John
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Beautifully penned, John. Phenomenal imagery my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Gracias Damian. Thank you so much for reading and your appreciation of both me and my poetry.
John
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Your poem puts me in the mood of sailing and travel, the image of a sailor who is watching and expressing the scenes, keeping it in his head because soon it will only be a memory. There is sadness going along all the lines. Emotionally written.
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Thank you so much Light for your heartfelt reflections on my poem. Your impressions of my words here are deeply appreciated. Love your interpretation of the mood within my words. Indeed there is a depth of understanding in your thoughts and the feelings my poem inspired for you that really feels right. Deep gratitude.
John
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You are very welcome my friend🤍
Wishing You peaceful and happy times🕊️
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Tremendous work. Powerful writing.
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Thank you so very much Thomas. Glad you enjoyed this. Much appreciated.
John
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Inspiration can come from many places, but to be able to create something like this is exceptional, John. Great poem with creative images. 🙂
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Deep gratitude my friend. Very glad you enjoyed this offering of mine. Much appreciated. Indeed the chanteuse who inspired this poem was an exceptional inspiration. 🙂
John
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Read MoreCradled In the Mist and Moonlight of Her Druid Nights I make my bed in a patch of clover perchance to dream. And I dream of her under the stars on a summer night. There she is the woman...
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So Lugh watched her bathing, and Bridgette thought it was ok to gaze upon her. That is nice. Then, when they took the boat ride and died together, (aww) At the end, they decided where to be reincarnated, wrapped it up nicely, and the fact that they said the Emerald Isles, I smiled at that.
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Love your observations on my story my friend. Much appreciated. Yes this was a kind of romance through the centuries. Glad the ending made you smile. Thank you so much.
John
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Read MoreAI Art Generated by Goldenmyst Where the Sacred Cenote Remembers the Tasteof Forbidden Jicama Under a Borrowed Moon A marital spat erupts between the Mayan creator, Hunab Ku, and the creatrix of humankind because he cheated on her with a...
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I like how you blend Mayan and African in this. The gods would never be as severally punished as a human would. Then she found or they found someone for her. To make her behave. I like it.
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Love your thoughts on my story my friend. Indeed the human woman seems to be the most punished. Very glad you enjoyed how I put African and Mayan cultures together in my story. Yes indeed she was made to behave. Thank you so much for reading my friend.
John
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Deep gratitude. I very much appreciate your reflections on my story. Love your impressions on my story. Really means so much to me. Great thanks.
John
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This is such a truly mesmerizing story. I was captivated from the very first line. You weave a vivid, beautiful tale of myth, transformation, and empowerment.
Tayanna’s journey from mortal victim to spiritually and physically reborn heroine is stunning, and I love the playful ending where she cleverly draws her distracted partner back to their love and intimacy. A brilliant blend of legend, heart, and agency.
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Your words here are true to my story, Romaj. Your review is so excellently written and so perceptive as you followed the story’s threads with amazing insight. I thank you from my heart for your keen understanding of the underlying themes held within my tale. Your comment clearly reflects your in depth reading of this tale and I am truly grateful to you.
John
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This, to me, is a story of trials and the wisdom that is gained from them for Tayanna. It’s also about second chances and forgiveness. The potion itself seems a lock and key. Well done, John.
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Thank you so much Tim. I love your keen observations here. You really have a great mind that sees into the heart of the themes of my stories. I am forever grateful to you for really delving deep into the meaning of my tale. And very grateful for your behind the scenes advice on revisions that made the story so much clearer and better. Most grateful.
John
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Marvelous piece here John. You have the gift of telling a story and keeping us intrigued from start to finish. A story I would love to see converted to film. Bravo!
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Deep gratitude my friend for your reading of my story. Your words on my prose are taken to heart. Much appreciated especially your thoughts on how this could make a good film. Thank you so much.
John
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Excellent work.