That is just frikin brilliant….broken heart brilliant…..just plain bloody brilliant.
I hope the writing is cathartic for you.
Everything is impermanent…..stay calm and stay safe.

Extremely heartfelt poem only you could have written.

Hey Fia!
Well good then, because I was looking to make it gutting. Success?!
I like wow’s. So thank you!

Beautifully penned, Mark. Into the book it belongs! The longing in this write is felt my friend, really pulled at these old heartstrings. Amazing write. Appreciate you.

Damian

This pulls at the heart and strings it till there is nothing left. Wow

No, it’s not reflective of your current life but what a write. The absence of a partner or loved one can really be felt when things get quiet. No laughter or anyone to take care of and vice versa. Life is meant to be shared. Loneliness sucks. But most of the time it’s only for a little while. People get on planes and stuff, you know, to visit. So hang in there buddy. I’m taking you to a rematch of miniature golf!!

This is relatable to the world, especially after Covid. We still are struggling to get back to how it was:)

It’s a doozy, I know. I meant it to be an ass kicker.
(I’m liking that current avatar of yours! You look great!)
Even if this isn’t an accurate portrayal of current events, it is relatable to many, if not all, a time or two. That’s what I was after.
I don’t want to be stuck in one certain type of “fluffy” writing. Lol.
Thanks btw. You keep kickin butt!

Man , does this hit home.
I won’t name nameds to protect the innocent and the depraved but you lit it up Mark and I knocked them down with broken shot glasses and stains where they should be ….

BIG

RL AWARD if you will anyway …

Hello HHHHHHHH! LOL.
How’s things?
I’m just trying to come up with writes that can make people “see” and feel it. Yaknow?
Thank you, too, for being here!!!

And yeah, I get dragged back to make my first comment at you trying to pull one.
This was pretty brutal, and I was absolutely crazy about the way you paced it.
Glad to hear there was nothing wrong in your personal life. This was a kickass write.
As always.

once in awhile I can mimic the brutality of some of you better writers. It’s motivating actually. Your words are greatly missed young lady.
Thanks, you.

This one hits hard where it hurts the most, heart, memory and soul. I love the depth, the raw honesty and all the unfathomable hope that lingers for a long, long time.
Amazing spill.

Thanks Wally, it’s cool that you went back for this older one. I really wanted to express the ache of loneliness and how it guts us. I hope it works that way. Sometimes when we let the ideas brew in our heads awhile, it takes on a realistic vibe that we can perhaps truly feel once we write them down. Yeah?

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Fantastic!

There’s a spiritual side to this I think you caught. Really creative writing here. Nice job!

Das ist wirklich ein Meisterwerk, Daniel!
Like Tim, I appreciate the spiritual side of your writing. I understand the candlelight as a metaphor for our own inner light. The light in our hearts allows us to see other persons like they really are, beyond their appearance, social roles or status symbols. Brilliant!

Passionately penned, Brenda. Spectacular write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Powerful and hot.

hello beautiful Mary sorry for my late response thank you so much 💕

thank you graciously lovely poetess 💕

hi dearest Benny enjoy your swim let the rest go stay in the moment great write 💕

A great write, for a rhyming one at that. I actually left work early to rush home and complete a poem that I was scrapping together at work. And then I went to the (community) pool! A productive day, lol.
Your write is well stocked with reflection and insight. I enjoyed it very much.

I really enjoyed reading this.
The first verse was immense.
Kind regards
James

Tremendous work, my friend.

Passionately penned, Brenda. This is an amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian