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I appreciate the read and the comment, Fia. I am happy you enjoyed both!
Thank you for stopping by.
Clay
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great flow and subject matter very beautiful ❤️
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Thank you, my friend! It was a gorgeous day and place that inspired it.
I appreciate you taking the time.
Clay
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Hello, Her. You nailed it, my child-self was indeed a’visiting. It brings me true joy to know this poem was helpful for you!
You may borrow my rose-tinted glasses anytime.
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Carefree, peaceful, a joyous, tranquil vibe. Nice work.
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Thank you, Visions_of_Insanity, you captured this poem’s spirit perfectly. I keep wishing I could return to that afternoon!
I appreciate the visit
Clay
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Read Moredeep I go and deeper stillcultivating sadness it shines inside of me why deny itsweet melancholy serenades in the shadowsquietly I play my melodymetiqulously I climb the notes into my black dintheir is cackling accompanied by whispersthe horde reside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?
You write powerfully, Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️
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Benjamin Scraps and
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Read MoreThis is your quick Sunday News We have started a new Forum called Collaboration. If you want to join and see if someone would like to collaborate with you that is the place to go. (Please try not to directly...
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It’s good to to be able to keep up with site developments, thanks again Fia .. Neville 😎👍
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Great info Fia. Thanks!
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Thanks, Fia. You keep us all well informed my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Very cool
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I like the rhyming scheme and the poem.