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Read MoreBonnie Blue ain't so Bonnie.Bodies on sale in a camera glare,men grow quietejaculate and swear.When lust is counted,not felt true,love retreats,and hearts undo.Brenda: “I don’t think the problem is sex itself. It’s what Bonnie Blue’s story becomes, a spectacle....
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
I wasn’t sure if I were taking liberties by using yours and others names.
In the end I think they mostly would agree with my views on the Bonnie Blue thing.
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This is a good conversation to have. The double standard and how society views it. Like the use of the writers on here. I think you capture their voice well.
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Brilliant work
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
It’s a fascinating doco on Bonnie.
I’d like to see the uncut version.
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
This is an absolutely powerful writing, dear Peter! Your idea to bring several Starsrite member for a meaningful discussion on the Round Table is brilliant! Thanks a lot for including me!
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![Profile picture of Backdeckbenny (Peter)]()
I included you because I like your depth.🙏
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Ohh this one is as painful as a biting chill on unprotected flesh. Cold is the perfect title. Sending hugs your way, Brenda 🧡
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello beautiful Willow thank you for the hugs… hugs you back just a bad day you know…❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Is there a chance of finding someone who is worthy of the obviously very fine you? I hope so. 🙏🤗
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Jim it is a very kind request sadly the probem lies within my heart it doesn’t know how to not love thank you for being so beautiful to me ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Brenda. Chillingly painful with such raw grit, excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hello dearest Damian good evening thank you for feeling me on these painful thoughts ❤️
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![Profile picture of Thomas W. Case]()
Superb work. Powerful.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
Now this one I can see a bit of the dark side. There’s a deeply relatable element to this that transcends subject or time. Depending on the point of being, it fits multiple topics. We write from a perspective and when it’s shared, it develops unexpected layers. I would like to have seen it performed during your 15 minutes of fame. It must have had a tremendous draw to it, my friend
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in a very dark place when I penned this one, I was going through something heavy, and it came out in the words. The one thing I truly love about what we do as writers, is the multiple meanings the reader or listener can take away from our words. We as the writer know what we’re really talking about or going through when we create. The reader doesn’t have those blinders on, they are in fact another point of view, without the writers biases. It is a great little song. It got a response from the crowd. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Fia Naturie]()
This makes me feel your pain. The growl had to be wicked on this song.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I was in pain when I penned this, so the words are ripe with it. The growl makes its point known. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
hugs dearest Damian I am person who doesn’t know how to stop loving… I feel this write very deeply beautiful soul ❤️
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I don’t know how to stop myself. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Sappho (Elke)]()
Your words transform pain into art, dear Damian! I feel your heart and soul dripping from your pen. Intense and beautiful!
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. That’s so kind of you to say, what a lovely comment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Visions_of_Insanity]()
Powerful piece of poetry Damian. Dark and intense! Great work here.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the lyrics my friend. I could be dark and intense sometimes for sure. This was a pretty painful time I was going through, life has a way of fucking with you sometimes! lol. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Morein my waiting time I think of youpure beauty and longingwistful understanding to desireyour western drawl remindeds me of summermy passion stirred and I feel the pangs againto go down south and meet you barefoot in the grassmy soul...
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
can I watch? just kidding – sort of….
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Makes me want to hop on the saddle. 😉
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
giggles thank you dearest Jim ❤️
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👅
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with amazing imagery and wordplay my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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![Profile picture of Crimsin]()
good morning dearest Damian thank you graciously for the love on this ❤️
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hello lovely poetess thank you graciously for such a sexy comment ❤️
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
NO – A nice one. 😉
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Read MoreI wonder, after all these years,If she still considers herself luckyTo have landed a fishOf such colour and tenacity.Or,Does she now only seeFaded beautySans scales, sans colour, sans vitalityYet still attached to her hook?I ask myself the same questions...
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend this one has layers. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerfully penned, Peter. Cool idea, thanks for the honorable mention my friend. A group of writers with critical thinking skills having a rational conversation. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian