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That is correct, Fia — not be just some one.
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Hey, my friend…This one aches with honesty—the kind that doesn’t clean itself up or ask for forgiveness.
It’s messy, human, and brave as hell, the voice of someone still standing inside the wreckage and telling the truth anyway.-
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Thanks, Thomas, this is a very nice review, my friend. And yes, it was difficult to write, but you know how things have been with me lately. I’ve been very circumspect about many things, and this was one result of that.
However, how about a laugh? Check this page or better yet, any of YOUR pages or someone else’s work. You will not there is an option to listen to our poems, even when we did not make or post any audios for them! And they are absolutely dreadful bits of garbage! It’s too funny to get angry about it, especially since it seems to be affecting all of us! The Spoken Word category is gone, too! Isn’t it hilarious? I sent a note to Fia about itt. What a hoot!
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Oh yes…..I’ve heard my poems read by machines…it’s hideous.
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Oh, I’m a sucker for free verse. The way this flows. The unapologetic confessional narrative. This is bold, brave, vulnerable. It is all soul, and I love every line of it. Thank you. Very powerful.
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Thank you for your kind words, Kay-1. I have to admit it: I’m a sucker for praise. “Thrill me chill me fulfill me,” the lady said. If you know where that quote came from, you understand; if not, it doesn’t matter. I don’t think we’ve met, so welcome to my pad. I hope you venture through some of my other work. And let me know if there is any particular piece of yours you would like me to read, but beware: I am honest in my reviews, unless you’re writing about me.
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haha. Lydia Deetz. Beetle is my man, or maybe it’s my childhood crush on Michael Keaton that has me thinking this. He is and always will be my Batman. I digress. I very much plan on reading more of your work. Sometimes I simply read and like, but since I have your permission, I will definitely offer my feedback. You can look at any of my posts and critique them. In fact, I could do with some critique of my last post. I’m thinking of polishing and publishing it. I know it’s rough, and I have thick skin. So do your worst.
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You will note that I already have. And I do hope you like it.
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Read MoreAdvertising temptationA credit possession driven nationSo determined, so obsessedWith having only the bestSwipe away what isn’t yoursTo compare and competeTake out another loanBeg, borrow, steal Fancy car, you’re in debtHouse on show, not your assetImmaterial, materialDeath by debtBlinded by greedTermination...
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hi dearest Keith this is so true my daughter followed in my footsteps of shopping when she feel sad excellent write ❤️
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So many use shopping when feeling low. That could become quite tragic and very expensive. Make sure your daughter doesn’t fall into a viscous cycle with her spending. Thanks Brenda!! xox
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write with amazing wordplay my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you enjoyed Damian.
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A wonderful, perfectly written piece of social criticism, dear Keith! Too many people appreciate material wealth only, lacking emotional intelligence, compassion and respect for all living beings. A powerful message! xox
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Yes they do. Spending on foolish items can become a real problem. Many buy on impulse and enjoy that quick rush. When reality sets in, they feel miserable and defeated. The cycle starts all over again. Thanks Elke..xo
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This hits like a cold slap, unflinching in its portrait of obsession and debt. I love how it mixes social critique with a personal edge—you can feel the shame, the watching eyes, and the inevitability of it all.
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Awesome feedback here Thomas. Thank you!
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Read MoreRide my cock you little pigJill gave her dog a bonerGoldilox sprinklers flower on her wet spot, ya dig?Jack Horner is a frequent sperm donor If you have many daughtersDon't give them to your sonsI'll send you two penniesBiting and...
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Cleverly penned, Keith. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. I always appreciate you!
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This is not exactly what I used to sing to my own children once. 🤣
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Hello Elke. Your kids would love these nursery rhymes. Appreciate the awesome feedback!
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OMG Clever Clogs! I’ll never read those rhymes again without having an orgasm! Thank you (breathless). Harriet-Jacqui xx
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Very refreshing to hear. Thank you HJ
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This is funny. I did twist nursery rhymes years ago to. They are fun to write.
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You should post them on starsrite. Thanks Fia..xo
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Read MoreWhy doesn't it ever end? Some people are richSo many are poorSome live in peaceSome live within a war What are the reasonsFor all the madnessWhat are the reasonsFor human pain & suffering Some people are obeseOthers are frailSome die due to...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Excellent write my friend, spitting facts on this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes! Many saddened facts! Thanks man.
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This is a perfectly written testament to our fractured society , dear Keith. Unfortunately , the news on radio , tV and social media is dominated by reports on Wars and crime. I’m afraid this fuels all the negativity even more. If we want peace and human values, we must focus on them and live them. Peace to you my friend! xox
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The negativity is on going all day and all night. We need to separate this from our lives or we’ll become a negative creep.
Peace to you as well, my awesome friend..xo
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This is good. I like poems that have questioned beginning and then give what it could be.
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Appreciate the feedback my friend.
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This is freaking deep and introspective.
This really got me “still be someone? And not someone?”
I took it as can I still be a person and just not another number.