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Read MoreLast week she stood on the roof Threw a penny off and listened A few seconds went by Then she heard the faint bright sound of it hitting the cement She looked up into the night sky Clear, No planes, no clouds, nothing but darkness...
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Guess not. Thanks Fia.
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That’s gonna leave a mark for sure, and a hell of a mess. Does everybody jump in your stories? I’ll correct that, I think you had a story where somebody got thrown off a roof. lol. Incredible write, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It’s my second story with roof jumping. Jumping off of a roof has always intrigued me. I’ve jumped off my parents roof a few times. The last time I broke my arm. Now I jump off my shed and into my pool. Safer. Thanks Damian.
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Crisp… echoes…
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Appreciate the feedback. Thanks!!
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Mic Drop!
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Thanks man
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Reminds me of the song Jumper. Great ink.
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Cool reference. Thanks Nick.
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Push me and then just hurt me…
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Thanks PAR for the read & comments
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Excellent.
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Thanks!
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Read MoreHe tells me he’s doing better now It’s been a long upward crawl up from the sewer The bottom floor was hell for real He used to be addicted to junk Now he’s addicted to talking about how he’s not addicted to junk Counting...
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Powerfully penned, Keith. That’s a lot of what addiction does, it waits for you to get complacent. Especially in the beginning, I speak from experience. Sometimes I had to talk myself down early on, it’s the toughest part of getting clean. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my friend for the feedback and comments.
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We all have our addictions. And as much as we want to get away from them they are embedded into our souls. Like rot.
Great ink, friend.
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Addiction is one tough demon to destroy. Thanks Nick.
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Read MoreYou don’t make me feel like you used to That’s why I’m leaving That’s why people leave each other They come to their senses and get selfish again
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In the beginning, I think we are all selfish. I want him or her because I know what they can do for me or to me. Then the honeymoon phase is over and you’re left alone to start again. Nice
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Thank you Fia. Appreciate it.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s human nature in a way, great write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Totally human nature. Thanks Damian.
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Relationships can be very difficult because selfishness does get in the way.
Great ink
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Thanks Nick.
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you make me smile dearest Keith great write 💕
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Thanks Brenda. You rock! xox
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Intensely penned, Keith. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks my friend.
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Superb.
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Thanks Thomas. Appreciate it.
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Appreciate that Duende. xo
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Got to make it happen haha. I always enjoy a dark read.
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Thanks Nick.
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Take an extravagant theme, add a big pinch of dark humour, a hint of weirdness, and use extraordinary writing skills and make a short, precise poem out of the ingredients – perfectly done, Keith ! xoxo
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Hello Sappho. This piece came to me when I saw a younger couple arguing in their car. It looked heated and the two were verbally shouting at one another in a parking lot. Quite embarrassing as onlookers were staring. I don’t know what it was about or who was right or wrong. However, the young woman was really pretty. Sexy enough to take out to lunch. And a short poem was created. Thanks my loving friend. xoxxo
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