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    The Judge Made Me Get A Divorce

    Meeting up with the ladies at the bar to blow off some steam on a Friday night. It's supposed to be a relaxing night but instead it turned into this conversation.Hello ladies, and welcome to the Do It Right...

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    • Phenomenal storytelling, Fia. Always love your dialogue it’s very authentic my friend. Fantastic write. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    Draw The Line

    I’ve been walking in my sleep Journeys across space and time Dark forces slowly start to creep Out of this chalk outline I climb   Riddles are their own mystery  Meaning is squeezed from words Every scandal with a long history  Was designed for thinning herds   Opportunity never...

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    Brokenheartsville: Slut Wife III

    I could hear Joe Nichols' "Brokenheartsville" blasting through the bathroom door as I reached for the handle. Dan had his phone volume on maximum and was harmonizing to the piece perfectly."...Here's to the past, they can kiss my glass!...

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    • First word and first reaction. Jesus.
      I do not say that often, but you made me say it so many times that I may have to go to church. What a chapter.

      • Conveniently, tomorrow is Sunday. Woops… that’s actually today in NY. I’ve got 3 minutes.
        So, anyway… I hope that means you like it.

    • Passionately penned, DK. You definitely know your way around adjectives my friend. Very descriptive indeed, the flashback with the events of the wedding, was a nice contrast to the festivities. Deep undertones my friend, incredible storytelling. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • It makes me happy that you noticed the wedding flashback because putting that in there was sort of a pinnacle to the experience. I didn’t mean for it to be a contrast so much as a reference to guilt and obscenity, but then, you’re right. What could be more opposite than matrimony and slimy bathroom infidelity?

        You always make me think, Damian.

    • Hell yeah. Publish this stuff Meg!!!

      • Yeah, I can definitely see this in Barnes and Noble. I’m glad you like it, though! Thanks for following me on this.

        xoxo

    • Wow. You nailed this one.

    • Ohhh, goodness-ME!

      How can I adequately explain how fully I’ve enjoyed the foreplay, and every single succulently filling bit between Dan’s ‘n Meg’s actual consummation, and ummm-HMMM, what a magnificently sublime consummational array of endlessly various climaxes it was … WHEWWWEE!

      Excuse me, please, Ma’am, while I turn up the oxygen supply!
      Onward, UPward! ⁓ Rascal🖌

      • You know, I never thought of this as ‘consummation’, but I’ll give you that interpretation! I’m super pumped that you like what you see, and I hope you can imagine what you read adequately enough to take that to bed.

        I love your comments, Richard!
        xoxo

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    Our Bouquet

    Lay me down in the bed of poppy flowers so I may dream Lay me down in a bed of roses that screams romance and tenderness Lay me down in a field of sunflowers as the soft breeze cascades over our...

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    Losing The Light

    Cracks in the armor start to appearHow long before they figure it out?Surely someone will sense the fearThat lingers behind this self-doubt Falling fast into this desperate abyssWhen was the last time it was silent?The punchline was a swing and...

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    • Excellent piece of poetry Damian. Fantastic!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • How long will it take to figure it out? Some get it quickly. Very nice flow to this Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I don’t know really, I’m still figuring that out. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Killer last line, Damian. Way to finish a fine piece such as this.

      Daniel

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Daniel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you, I was a fan of the last line as well. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I always tell myself when feeling dark try being the light for others. I think if you are showing care toward people that can bring the light back.

      Great ink

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That’s a positive approach, better than trying to make the waters more murky. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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