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      My Lover Of Fear

      i won't shed a tear no i'll never weep my only lover is fear and with her i sleep   i won't lose this war no I'll never retreat my lover knows the score and she's tired of defeat   i won't bare the mark no i'll never sin my lover...

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      • I can hear the ring of youthful sorrow, for sure. Even then your writing was excellent, my friend. Talent is apparently timeless.

      • I sense the merging of poetry and song .. it seems even back then you had something of a golden pen sir D .. Neville 😎👍

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was one of those writes that I knew I had something good, but I never considered myself a poet in those days, I was a lyric writer and engulfed fully into songwriting at that moment in my life. I always believed a lyricist wasn’t on the same level as a poet. Even, Bob Dylan, one of the best lyricist’s of all time has never considered himself a poet. I think a little differently these days. lol. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • DAMN! If this is your 1st poem, this is excellent. Has a lyrical flow. Nicely said my friend.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It was one of the first for sure, maybe even number one. I was a lyricist first at the time in my life. There were a couple different poems I penned in 96. I just put the year on my writes back then, anyhow there were a couple of poems scattered throughout my lyric book. Back when everything was handwritten. lol. I was just always pulled to rereading this one a lot. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Oh! This is damn good.

      • Your talent was there from the beginning. Great metaphorical poem, Damian.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • This made it to my book cuz. Beautifully done.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. I’m honored to make it into your book my friend. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.

          Damian

      • Damien with an edge! I dig it.
        It has a great rhythm and flow.
        Thanks for sharing something you hold dear.
        It’s not always easy.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adel. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Yeah, I had a little bit of an edge back in the day. lol. I’m so glad I shared it, and I do hold this one dear. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Damian your poem is as lyrical as it is deep. The idea of fear as a lover is a brilliant metaphor and I could really hear the melody of your words. Loved the creative flow here that took me into an exquisitely unfolding song.

        John

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It’s the idea of fear as a lover that always draws me back to this write as well. One of my better ideas. Glad you enjoyed the journey. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. That was what was so cool about it to me as well. “Fear as a lover.” Spot on my friend, Right back at you.. Appreciate you.

        Damian

      • What a splendid start of your poetic work, dear Damian! Fear as lover is an impressive and convincing personification. Like a lover, fear can accompany us until it becomes part of us. Your talent from a young age on is undeniable. Great work, my friend!

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You hit the nail on the head with your commentary, it was one of my better ideas I’ll admit. Thank you for your continued support my friend. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • The darkness is shown, but it’s the kind of darkness that fills the silence and quietness after a sweep of pain. there is numbness and there is the teenage intense feelings and his mind, the mind that feels that no one understands him. This reminds me with Nirvana.

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Light. So glad you connected with the write my friend. You are so spot on with that analysis, I really enjoyed your commentary and feedback my friend. I felt all those things you mentioned in my life when I penned this one. Appreciate you.

          Damian

      • There are those who say we have to overcome our fear. I contend that it serves a purpose…and we move despite it. I will shamelessly admit that life has left me half terrified of my own shadow. But I’m still chugging along and doing the things. This was a brilliant piece. I’m not sure I would call it dark though. Maybe smudged around the edges? First poem? Damn, my friend…

        • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do think fear has a purpose as well. I’m an overly cautious human myself, I don’t seek out confrontation, in fact I try to avoid it. But sometimes it is necessary to face one’s fears. Maybe a little grey around the edges. lol. It was definitely one of the first, if not number one. Appreciate you.

          Damian

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      "I Remembered 'The Lion King'..."

      The Café` Series – Life As We Live It.“I remembered ‘The Lion King’…”Most all the “Café’s” are shuttered.But you can’t get what they GAVE …online.I look for places to pause now;places worth a pause, a view, a thought.So few,…so...

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      • hello dearest Chris a very heartfelt write I hate cycles and I love seasons why must everything always be changing? I take my moments where I can and have become secure with being invisible I used to draw attention not intentionally but I did none the less…I wish relationships lasted longer than cycles and seasons great write ❤️

        • Harry Potter’s Cloak wasn’t meant to silence us from speaking out about our existence… that was Voldemort’s function.
          And damn, he did it well.

      • one of my favorites stanza And we’re right!
        Always right.
        Always, always, and in all ways …right.

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      More than Skin Deep

      they tell her all the time"you're so pretty"she smiles with a little sighand thanks them politely but she was raised to rememberflesh is only the outer layerwhat matters is the insidehow she treats othershow she behavesand what she does with her...

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      • A great piece, this is great advice for both males and females. Tight

        • I believe it would be great for both. I only experience this world through the eyes of a woman though. So she was raised to be the fiercest woman she could in a world that often only sees our outer package

      • Wonderful write! Reminds me of my daughter, too. They are miraculous, aren’t they?
        ❤️k

      • Beautifully penned, Willow. In the book it belongs! Excellent tribute to your daughter, such a powerful message my friend. Amazing arrangement that fit the power of the meaning. Amazing work. Appreciate you.

        Damian

        • She’s on an upswing now but the pandemic took the wind out of her sails. As a fellow Pisces, you know the fluidity of y’all’s fierce nature. She will rock the world. Thank you, my friend

      • hello beautiful Willow you did beautiful job raising and guiding such a spirit ❤️

        • I did the best I could. I just wanted her to be strong in her sense of self. I never was and it took a toll. Thank you, Brenda 🧡

      • This is so heartfelt since I have 2 girls myself. Love what you wrote about your daughter.

      • I have witnessed this. To pay close attention to another’s entire being is to be rewarded with infinite wonders and friendships.
        Your poem is so thoughtful and tender while bearing a harsh truth.
        🙏💚

        • It’s aggravating for her to have thoughts and not be heard because they’re focused on the wrong things. Some would say it’s their loss, but its hers too. And mine. And every woman summed up by her physical attributes. Thank you, Jim

      • Awesome awareness of her value. It is old news, that our looks will fade and our health will wane, so what we have of value on the inside is what will sustain us. That fortitude to be a decent human even if surrounded by “less”. it is our shine, our aura, that will never fade. Sounds like she has hers intact, probably many thanks to you, dear Willow.

        • She’s a force to be reckoned with. There’s not much I’ve done that I’m super proud of, but raising her is top of the list. And to be honest, she teaches me now. Full circle. Thank you, Styxian

      • Her pedigree of character and consciousness has never fallen
        far from the Tree that bore the amazing fruit she has blossomed into

        Much respect always

        Naaj

        • I have my Roots to thank for setting an example that I was honored to teach her. It always comes back to the roots. Thank you, Naaj

      • This is an awesome tribute to your daughter, dear Willow! You raised her in the light of the only true values that matter – sustainable values of love, peace and understanding. You must be very proud of your daughter. She is really beautiful, she has a beautiful soul!

        • She is my rock, my shining star, my inspiration and my greatest joy. I am indeed very proud of her! Thank you, Elke

      • Excellent .. I just know for sure you are both so very lucky .. just being and having each other .. write on Willow 😎🌻👍

        • For a long time all we had was each other. I chose to be her mother first, not a buddy. Now I have a best friend. She’s forbidden me to die. We’ll see how that goes… Thank you, Neville

      • I only raised her so far…and the rest is her own indomitable spirit. She speaks, I listen. I am amused how often we say the same thing at the same time. She used to roll her eyes. Now she just laughs. I guess there are worse things than thinking like her mother. Thank you, girl

      • Fantastic ink Willow

        Bat

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      The Adventures of Tex & Blae-Lok - 3

      © 2025 It was a beautiful summer night in Austin, just a little warmer than usual for early June. A honeysuckle breeze made it almost perfect. A gazillion stars filled the sky and my way to my magnificent live...

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      behind each step

      Smoke curls along the alley,  and in the shifting haze  a mural dragon stares down,  its scales chipped,  yet the gaze still remains—  a watcher above the street.    A café door swings open,  voices spill into the night,  debating ethics over bitter coffee,  their words rising,  then breaking apart  like...

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