This is so light-hearted, and the innocence of watching children play is sweet. Now the sister swooping down had me laughing. This is a fun read.

Thank you, I’m so glad you enjoyed it. I used some pretty old cowboy and super hero names, so don’t feel bad if you didn’t recognize them.

As a sister looking for someone to play with while my brother is off having fun with his friends, I can say with glee I was the demon in pink boots, lol. Childhood nostalgia at its best. Great piece, Sam!

I know I’ve said it before but you really are the master of this writing genre Sam .. This one as always made me chuckle no end .. Write on my friend .. Neville 😎👍

Nailed it….👍

Beautiful words. Rich and full of imagery.
Regards
James

“Over time the room stretches” that is so true.

Damn, Bricky, you may be right. It’s been a while since I’ve been anywhere where grief is part of the landscape, but I recall times when I have been among those who are helplessly lost in their grief at the loss of a loved one, and the air was palpably thick with it, cloying, making it difficult to breathe. You are absolutely correct, my friend!

I think the button has already been pressed … nice one

Powerfully penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Spot on in fact. Appreciate you.

Damian

Spot on..you nailed it..it’s here and most of us are in denial..great write

Thanks for reading guys….you already knew the war had started….

Some things are just crying out to be written down and shouted out loud .. This is just one such thing .. I couldn’t agree more sir .. maybe we should form a cult or summat .. Neville 👍

Shout it, say it quietly, repeatedly. No means NO. I loved every line. I’ll be sure to check out your catalogue.