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Read MoreYour body died but that wasn't youhow could it beyou're not even dust nowjust energy returned to the umiverse.Existing only in the mindsof those left behind.Dependent soley on perceptions of you when you lived.But who was it that lived?The body you inhabited did...
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We are more than our physical bodies.
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There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.
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Thank you for the compliments Mary 🙏🏻
I’m planning on writing a poem alternating between English and my native language.
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” Blood stained feathers smeared across cross wearing habits.”
This hits home
Much respect
Naaj
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Thank you Naaj. It means a lot coming from you.
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Brilliantly penned, Drieks. This is a magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 🙏🏻
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What a fantastic final line summary, Girl!
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Read MoreThere is nothing like the feeling I get on FridayThe minute I think of the word, it’s like a switch goes offFriday is freedomFriday is sweet abandonFriday makes me feel sultry and decadentWhat is it about the day?Every Friday...
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Some Fridays can lead into a sexy Saturday morn…press repeat!
Haha…diggin this vibeBlessings
Naaj
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Thank you, Naaj ;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. You always know how to kick off a Friday, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. Friday is a thing for me.
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Friday’s Rule! Sunday Nights SUCK! Great poem Fia..xo
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You are so right, Keith 😊
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ya love a friday. good write
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Yes, I do. Thank you Ambjr ;))
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Fridays represent freedom, in my opinion. As one who observes the Sabbath, by Friday an hour or two before sunset, all my electronics (phone, laptop) are off. I am unreachable all of Friday night through Saturday evening, and that freedom is intoxicating. All I do for those hours is spend time catching up with family and friends, pray, and enjoy homecooked food that I made with my family. Conversely, Friday nights also mean a chance to care for oneself – whether going out and getting your groove on or staying home in pjs and Netflix. I do like this a lot, as it leaves ample room for personal interpretation. <3 Echo
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Thank you inechoingsilence. These are very good things to do on a Friday. Appreciate it 😊
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Fridays are for fucking. It’s just that simple. Someone frequently comes in from Tuscaloosa – and it’s on. There’s the rest of the weekend to recover… maybe.
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That is a classic line “Friday is for Fucking.” Love it. Dk <3
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Read MoreShe had these little cupsof coffee for eyes, and Ishould have stayed upall night.Love is a drunk whore.A lie from Saturn.Venus, slither back in theocean where you belong.Loneliness is a knife cuttingmy balls off.Knowledge arrived with analarm clock from...
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From the first line to the last, I was caught up in this
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Thanks, Willow.
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Brilliantly penned, Thomas. This is an incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks
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Outstanding poem Thomas. Love it!!
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
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I love the vague references and allusions, the metaphorical array of madness and symbolism. You can certainly feel the missteps and empathize with the devastation. As with all good poetry, I can read this in several different ways.
It’s a piece that keeps calling you back, Thomas… like a final glance behind you at a beautiful woman passing by.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…