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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Thought

Poetry

May 17, 2025

13

I think your hands forgotten the feel of meStaring out into the starless night The moon hides Echoes of faint memory Words said and movements crashes like the tideAll washed away in the dark froth of the ocean foam What else have you...

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11 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Damian. 😊
  Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend
- M.E
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Those hands should go to jail!!
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Cuffs please. Thank you, M.E😊
- Nick DC
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Yes we do. Thank you, Nick😊
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Keith 😊
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))
- Daniel Long
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Maybe you are rubbing off on me Daniel. Haha. It was late and I was sitting in a dimly lit room, with wine and this came to me. Thank you;))
Backdeckbenny (Peter) and dimpy are now friends

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Backdeckbenny (Peter)
@backdeckbenny
Thomas W. Case wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

It's Just a Hop, Skip, and a Jump to the Madhouse

Poetry

May 17, 2025

8

It's the little things thatdrives one mad,a snapped shoelace,on your way to theliquor store in thedriving snow.A cockroach inthe cereal,dead batteries, when all youwant to do is listento music.Shifty-eyed people inmy house, quietly plottingmy demise.It's the tree oflife, cut...

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7 Comments
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Thomas. This is very good my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you. I appreciate it.
- M.E
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  An excellent write, Thomas! “)
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thanks. Much appreciated.
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Wonderfully executed. Great work here.
  - Thomas W. Case
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you.
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you. Much appreciated.
M.E and Eyes of a hidden woman are now friends

• 1 year, 2 months ago

M.E
@mustapha
Backdeckbenny (Peter) wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

patiar silentio

Poetry

May 17, 2025

4

There is no one that escapes it. Suffering There are few that can sit with it. Suffering We all run away from it. Suffering We don't want to know it. Suffering What do you do with your? Suffering Which one are you? The never ending shopper avoiding. Suffering The serious drinker avoiding. Suffering The...

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3 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Tremendous work.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thomas, well..this crafted well.you keep driving home suffering as if you stop then we will not know the depth of it.
    Nice
- Backdeckbenny (Peter)
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thanks Mary….funny how the better ones involve the least thinking.💋
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