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Fia Naturie wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Mistaken Tears (N.E. Challenge)

Poetry, Uncategorized

May 25, 2025

13

Some say that tears, when shed, are healing Why don't I feel healed then I can tell you why But will you accept the truth Accepting responsibility and showing that you understand Are the steps to move forward There is a problem here Deep rooted Like an old...

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12 Comments
- Thomas W. Case
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Superb
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Thomas 😊
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Love your spacing… very effective emphasis. Second person narrative is such a powerful literary POV, and you’ve taken full advantage. The conversational tone reflects the overwhelming effort to maintain control. The piece is as much about self as it is situational management, and I think the limited information provided makes it all the more relatable.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you for letting me know that this is a relatable piece. It is not always easy to publish something that you second-guess yourself about. I really appreciate it, DK;))
    - DampKitten
      1 year, 2 months ago
      
      You’re right, and it’s important to defer the temptation of providing too much information. Poetry is frequently vague. That’s what makes it beautiful.
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you, Wil;))l
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Powerfully penned, Fia. There is venom in those words my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Damian 😊
- Visions_of_Insanity
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Heavy! Like this a lot.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you, Keith 😊
- Poemstar
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  This is incredibly raw and honest. The way you describe the tears as rage, not sorrow, feels so real. Thank you for sharing this.
  - Fia Naturie
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you for reading this. Poemstar
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• 1 year, 2 months ago

Ashes to energy (N.E Challenge)

Poetry

May 25, 2025

4

Your body died but that wasn't youhow could it beyou're not even dust nowjust energy returned to the umiverse.Existing only in the mindsof those left behind.Dependent soley on perceptions of you when you lived.But who was it that lived?The body you inhabited did...

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- S. Libellule
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Love this… great job… excellent flow… great authenticity…
- Fia Naturie
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  We are more than our physical bodies.
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  There’s something very “Dr. Spock” about this. Logical. Pure Energy.
  That’s some deep thinking, Peter. I’m heading into orbit.
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Drieks wrote a new post

• 1 year, 2 months ago

Sins

Poetry

May 23, 2025

8

The mourns are incoherent to the ears of newborn’s unicorn parents. Blood stained feathers smeared across cross wearing habits.Cherish the tales of the salt and tears soaked sails. Admire the sapphire look on drug filled pills.Flee to the center...

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6 Comments
- Drieks
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Thank you for the compliments Mary 🙏🏻
  I’m planning on writing a poem alternating between English and my native language.
  Not sure how that’ll work out!
- NAAJIR
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  ” Blood stained feathers smeared across cross wearing habits.”
  
  This hits home
  
  Much respect
  
  Naaj
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Naaj. It means a lot coming from you.
- Damian DeadLove
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  Brilliantly penned, Drieks. This is a magnificent write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
  - Drieks
    1 year, 2 months ago
    
    Thank you Damian 🙏🏻
- DampKitten
  1 year, 2 months ago
  
  What a fantastic final line summary, Girl!
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