This is a beautiful telling of what one feels towards another.

Wow! You’re a Wordsworth Rascal! Damn, you know how to melt a heart, don’t you? I’m a rhyme and meter girl with much of my poetry, so I appreciate the elegance of this piece despite its lack of contemporary appeal. The message is anti-materialistic and wholly wholesome with a massive slice of humility. You’re slipping in that age factor, that timeless long-lasting relationship that so many country songs emphasize.

It’s worth a roll in the hay any day, Rascal. Put a daisy in my hair.

xoxo

This is one of my favorite subjects, its a poem of sweet sincerity..

Thank you, Dear Poetess 🌈🍷

How delightful of you to pick one of my humble little pieces to read and leave such cozy words of compatibility.

A lovely flower for You 🌻 ⁓ Rascal🖌

Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a great musing, always dig the musings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you, Damian. 😊
Chocolate wine strokes again. My friend

Those hands should go to jail!!

I think we all hope to be remembered by those we interact with. Maybe keep a part of us alive. Great ink

Great! Last line brings it home. Nice work Fia..xo

Thank you, Hamid. I appreciate you saying that;))

Forgotten memories that echo, washed away in the dark froth, staring. Fia, this poem is almost like what I write hahahaha. It short, the imagery, delivers a quick punch 👊 👏 the way poetry should be! Bravo!