Beside the pond ⁓
Alone,
I sat beside the pond
this morning.
Early sun …
vibrant in its warm flush
of golden welcome
came cascading down
from treetops’ glow,
embracing grass,
gifting colors vividly alive,
lifting flowers’ faces …
with their honey-pollened smiles.
I was amazed
at how the breeze knew
I missed you
or was even thinking of you,
but I’d swear
it touched mine with your cheek,
slid a wisp of your locks
across my shoulder,
and became the sweetness
of your breath.
Olive oil and rose bouquet …
… it hung for awhile
in the morning air,
a fragrant marker
along a trail of yesterdays,
leading to You …
places of dreams and hope,
of love and laughter
and impossible possibilities.
I almost started to believe
I’d turn my head ~
and you’d be there.
Each year
has come and gone …
You, like fertile mana
ever glowing, growing
in my heart.
It’s said all things end,
and walking back to the house
I sensed that coming truth,
as Autumn’s leaves
began falling
like tears ~
washing around
my feet.
Rascal
©2025









Okay, I definitely picked up the metaphor – particularly fall. And I love the imagery and the essence of your description. I like how you meld the natural scene into a memory, slowly transforming the piece by use of personification. It’s a beautiful and moving piece that tugs on the heart. A pond has a minor majesty of isolated tranquility and intimacy, a seclusion befitting of a secret. You’ve picked your surroundings carefully.
I’m impressed, even if you are a rascal.
xoxo
Ya know, Lady-Poet?
Seems I’ve been posting more in melancholy mood; wonder why? 🤔
Thinking I should brighten the page a bit more … any suggestions?
Some things I genuinely enjoy about your reviews of my humble pieces are in the ways you have of letting me know you’ve actually read and understood their core essences … in how you concisely translate their metaphor, ambience, and timbrous moments — mostly, that you are so brilliantly capable.
I’m so happy you let my rascally side impress your keenly insightful self! ⁓ Richard🖌
BTW, hugs ‘n kisses have their own special language. x0x