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I like how you repeat that couplet at the end. It wraps everything up in a neat package. This is a really cool piece with sociopathic undertones which catch my attention. I love an unreliable narrator. I love an evil genius. A lot of women do… the bad boy syndrome. Boys grow up to be devils. And girls… well, sometimes we invite them in.
Nice piece!
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I really appreciate you for shining your light on this.
A man’s (in this case) internal struggle in such a situation has always intrigued me, yet is beyond alien to me at the same time.
I love exploring my uncharted territory.
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Read MoreWhat kills love is not time but the hunger unfed, the fire untended, the body that forgets how to say yes.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS and
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Read MoreHusband : There's only us two home for dinner tonight.Thought you could eat me for entree,I'll eat you for mains and for dessert...I'll leave that up to you. Wife: Sorry , I'm on a diet so will have to skip...
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This is so funny. There is no escape. lol
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Cleverly penned, Peter. A very witty write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow! You can never be too prepared, can you? The truth is, sex is really good for headaches.
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I’ve got a headache now…
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Put on the Marvin Gay. I’ll be right over
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Once again you’re a great storyteller and I always enjoy the dialogue you write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian
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Your writing shines. Excellent as always!
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Thank you, Keith;))
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Thanks for sharing my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian