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Read More1.So now, you seek a primer—after years of painting—Without enough sanding,Drowning in the paradox of colors.2.There is enough paint in here (my heart) to fill that emptiness.I opened it like Pandora’s box.3.Armed to the teeth with brushes and rollers,Stripped...
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Thank you, Damian! Appreciated! “)
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Very interesting dialogue. Is this internal or external?
It is not about painting, I agree. nice work-
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External inspiration, internal conversation. 50/50 hehehe. I was painting a wall at home and using the process to write.
Thank you Fia! “)
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Tremendous metaphor. Superb work.
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Thank you brother! I appreciate it! “)
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Thank you my friend!! I appreciate it “) <3
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This piece is worded so well. Great description and a wonderful imagination here. Nice work.
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Thank you, brother! I appreciate it “)
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Thank you, Rosie C for the love and comment! “)
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This is deeply, thought-provoking.
I like the use of numbers in this. It makes it look like a list in the structure of a poem.
It’s different and inspiring. I can sense a lot of patience from the writer in this piece.
Captivating choice of words. I’m slightly hooked in. x
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I loved the last line. It reads like a bang to my heart. A heart touching piece. Well done. “)
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Thank you for taking time to read and comment M.E!
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Beautifully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Nice rhythm and cadence, it has an anthem feel. Incredible words my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Powerful work.
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Oh wow, I like this! You picked a great beat for the lyrics. I’m like neon after listening to that!
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Thank you! Happy to make you glow haha.
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Nicely done, Drieks. You’re an incredible lyricist my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Wow, thank you Damian. That really means a lot to me!
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Read MoreOn my last drunken escapade,I was sitting in my girlfriend'sliving room.It was 3:28 am, I was suckingon a cheap bottle of vodka, andIt was sucking the soul rightout of me.I knew things needed to change.She had just sucked me...
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hello dearest Thomas I wonder what has you sad your girlfriend or the drink and I’m curious what the bird symbolized…nice metaphoric write…💕
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Thank you Crimson. Both had me sad. Bird represents freedom and serenity.
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You know, when I drink Vodka, we’ve got dragons catching ravens. I just leave those motherfuckers alone.
Every poem tells a story, Thomas. I love it. But it does look like your girlfriend would have driven you.
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lol. Thank you. You are fantastic.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. I can definitely relate my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you.
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Vodka is my demon drink but I just read yesterday that it’s good for your heart in moderation…
Translation: it’s always good to clean up from time to time. The drink will be there, you just have not be too.
Powerful confessional
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Thank you. Much appreciated.
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Beautifully penned, M.E. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian